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Lux Tenebris


Creating stories is the only thing I have left where I feel like I add value to the world.

Comments ( 8 )

I look forward to the next story.

9810348
So do I, just need to edit and rewrite CoN first

I can dig it.

9810435
I was kind of laughing when one noble called Nate out on not being worthy of being a Guardian.

"What have I sacrificed? Let's see, my first official encounter with your kind nearly resulted in my death several times, punished and essentially enslaved for crimes I didn't commit and being born different, nearly died several times for a country and princesses that for all intents and purposes were not my own, chosen by their mother's hammer, and landed the winning blow in the war. I could go on about how much more I've bled and killed for a country and people I wanted nothing to do with after first impressions were done."

9811363
That too.

"And lost my hand. How many limbs have you lost for a country not your own?"

9811363
In the next story could you see about adding a bit more romance between Nate and Luna? I only remember 2 scenes that count for such in the original story.

9811397
I will, give it time

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