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awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
Okay, gonna ask a stupid question here. Why didn't Twilight just, you know, do a memory spell on him to make him "forget" Equestria? I mean if she's gonna tell Celestia about Jack, you may as well cover the rest of the bases and erase his memory and research to ensure he doesn't come back again.
Gotta love the back-up plans.^^
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Well then we wouldn't have a recurring villain now won't we.
Um? Aren't you a "Mortal" yourself?! 😑
Great chapter!
Oh man Now Jack got his hand on magical signature from Spike and the girls and who know what would happens if he succeed of traveling to Equestria.
I had a feeling that Spike and the girls will give him an even worse punishment to him when he travel to Equestria and do bad things... dressing him up as a little baby!
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Good point. Twilight and her family did use magic to make Spike’s parents accept that their house will get bigger and have the girls move in.
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By mere mortal she means one without powers and such
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Still, mere mortal kinda sounds a little strange and awkward coming from her. How about "normal human" instead.
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Maybe it could because Jack has a high IQ. The memory spell could only work on those who has an average intelligence or lower.
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I think it's too "cruel" and embarrassing to punish him like that.
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Agreed!
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Still? It's sounds a little egotistical to say. I mean, Spike, even the Main Five, and Sunset were ONCE Normal Humans/"Mortal" before they got their OP Dragon King/Emperor and Elemental Powers Respectfully.
Saying "Mortal" is like a arrogant Demi-God/God/Goddess, or a Tyrannical Villain like the Storm King would say!
When it comes to Spike he's a Wildcard.
This is a lot better. Thanks!
Wow, I am behind on these chapters.
That Jack seems like a real dork. But he’s also clearly a technical genius. I wouldn’t be surprised if he actually comes close to winning once in the future. Emphasis on “once”.
All in all, pretty funny and entertaining chapter.