you know, this isn't a half bad story. Its memorable and the sex scenes aren't bad. However I'm curious on Sweet backstory, or rather if her ex-fiance will try to find her, or better yet ponies will notice about this. Another thing I'm curious of, is why its only anal and oral? don't get me wrong, the scenes are good nevertheless, but I would've thought he went to her actual hole instead of her second one. unless pregancy can happen easily for ponies as it does for humans in this fic?
“Such a hard working mare,” Josh whispered as he came close, his voice rough and vibrating as his fingers moved her panties slightly to the side, teasing her hole.
And you are disturbing her, you ruffian! Not that anyone would mind...
If they are lucky there might even have been an bounty on Salticidae.
you know, this isn't a half bad story. Its memorable and the sex scenes aren't bad. However I'm curious on Sweet backstory, or rather if her ex-fiance will try to find her, or better yet ponies will notice about this. Another thing I'm curious of, is why its only anal and oral? don't get me wrong, the scenes are good nevertheless, but I would've thought he went to her actual hole instead of her second one. unless pregancy can happen easily for ponies as it does for humans in this fic?
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Thanks, I really enjoy creating lore and world-building, for me those are important part to enjoy a story as a whole.
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Sweet Velvet's past was left open in case I got the chance to explore it on another commission.
And about the kinks, well that's a bit of suspension of disbelief, there's not much explanation beyond: Both of them enjoy it.
How many chapters is this going to be?
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that's it for now, I'm actually talking with the commissioner about a sequel ^^
And you are disturbing her, you ruffian!
Not that anyone would mind...
If they are lucky there might even have been an bounty on Salticidae.