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Applespike forever


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Applejack and Spike love each other but are afraid to tell the other their feelings as they are afraid it will ruin their friendship or the other might not like them.
That is until the Mane 6 and Spike get invited to the Grand Galoping Gala Spike and Applejack are left alone and they have a conversation and things start to get to the confessions.

Warning: SEX
Violence for Swearing

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 19 )

Kinda rushed into it

Yah it seems kinda rushed but all in all it looks promising

9805131
sorry but She has took her time and its not rushed I am her best friend I’ll know if its rushed I write my own and they are rushed hate again and I will report every comment like this(From the owners friend)

9805026
sorry but She has took her time and its not rushed I am her best friend I’ll know if its rushed I write my own and they are rushed hate again and I will report every comment like this(From the owners friend)

9805354
Easy it was just a opinion it look nice just giving my review is all not trying to be mean

I agree with Lanceblazer17. It is a tad rushed, but I think that sets up the narrative nicely. I suggest that you could add some flashbacks to help Spike and Applejack's relationship be a bit better to understand, since we readers don't have much to go on, and that can make us lack sympathy for the characters.
Aside from that, I'd love to see where this goes.

Comment posted by Apollo3689 deleted Aug 28th, 2019

Why is there hate comments here? The first chapter is good and well developed. Cant wait to see the rest. Also, block haters, they ruin every fanfic just for fun.

Comment posted by Apollo3689 deleted Aug 28th, 2019

This might be simple I still like it a lot, keep up the good work
:twilightsmile:

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