You can't give up your laughter, cause you're scared of a little pain~. Writing to relieve PTSD. Enjoy my misery <3 you all. Discord: dougtheloremaster
Taking place before the CMC. Join Sweetie Belle in this heart-warming tale of Hallmark Movie levels of feel-good, as she discovers what her sister Rarity really means to her. The ties of family run deep and sometimes a sibling can be so much more.
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''Taking place before the CMC.'' Uh... Not sure what you mean by this, since you very clearly have Rarity refer to Sweetie as ''my brave crusader'' and Sweetie Belle talks about Scootaloo and Applebloom as if they're close friends.
All in all the story feels a bit rough but quite nice.
Side note: I don't think you have to write the ''darling'' as ''dah-ling''
Most people know how she pronounces it.
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^ all my stories contain easter egg references. Growing up in my family you would replace "crusader" with soldier as my family is military based.
^the point is when she speaks in the show she draws it out. It adds to the character shown. Psychologically the character in the story displaying a well known quirk shows the character is alive because it matches the mentality of how the reader sees the character.
I appreciate your thoughts however, glad you enjoyed it.
my stories are not to be taken literally. This one is based on the idea of SB being around 5-6. before the CMC formed.