Running Like the Wind (Part 4) (Edited)
The Crimson Chin, robbed of his power and reduced to being Charles Hampton Indigo, could only watch with despair as the Bronze Kneecap loomed over in him in his giant new fighting Bronze Bot. He laid helpless on the ground, unable to do anything.
"At last Chin," The Bronze Kneecap said from his robot with wicked glee, "or should I say Charles. With you out of the way, I shall now use my machine to rule the world!" "And with a lovely lady by my side," the crazed villain said, holding Lady Lovely in his robotic hand.
"Chin, help me," the beautiful, helpless women said to the downed hero.
"He can't help you," The Kneecap said nastily, "he can't even help himself." The massive machine turned away from the weakened hero, with Lady Lovely screaming all the way.
The cries of the woman filled Charles with something. He felt extreme anger. He felt extreme shaking. Without realizing it, his chin grew back, and his muscles started-
"Boring," Timmy said, throwing the Crimson Chin comic book away in disgust.
"How could that be boring," Scootaloo said. The two were at Canterlot's running track in the early hours, where Timmy putting in some last minute training before the race the coming afternoon. They had been allowed a short break by Rainbow. The two discovered they enjoyed Crimson Chin, and decided to read the newest edition together.
"The Chin gets his powers back because he loves someone," Timmy said mockingly. "And then he defeats in the Bronze Kneecap in one page? How lame is that?"
"I think it's cool," Scootaloo said with a smile. "His love is so strong, he can overcome anything."
"But there's no build up," Timmy complained, "no foreshadowing, no-,"
"OK guys," Rainbow said, "break time over, back to work." Timmy and Scootaloo ran back into the field for more exercise. After some sit ups, push ups, and squats, Rainbow was leading the two kids into doing some stretches.
"So how do you feel, Timmy?" Rainbow asked.
"A little...scared," Timmy said, stopping his stretching with a morose frown.
"Rainbow didn't look impressed. Scared," Rainbow said.
"I mean, I've only been training for a few days," Timmy said worriedly, "while Tad and Chad have been training-,"
"This isn't really a race," Rainbow said in a reassuring tone, "you just have to be in the top ten to qualify, and there are eleven of you competing."
"But what if I lose or just do bad," Timmy said morosely, "than everyone will make fun of me more, and Trixie won't ever talk to me."
"Yeah," Scootaloo said under her breath with sarcasm, "real shame."
"Timmy you can't think like that," Rainbow scolded, "or you'll never win."
"Easy for you to say," Timmy said, "you're popular, and cool, and great at sports." He sat down heavily. "I'm just....me."
"And what's wrong with that," Scootaloo said.
"A lot," Timmy said sadly.
"Oh stop feeling sorry for yourself," Scootaloo said with contempt.
"You think you're the only the only one who has had problems," Rainbow said with some scorn. "Listen up. I'm gonna tell you a story."
NOTE: The tune is similar to Non-Stop, from Hamilton and has some of the CHS rally song from Friendship Games thrown in.
Rainbow Dash
You think I'm fast,
You think I'm cool,
You think I'm tough,
You think I rule.
Scootaloo
It's all true,
She's so cool.
Rainbow Dash
But don't assume,
Don't assume,
That it was always true,
That I was always cool.
Timmy Turner
That can't be,
That can't be,
You're as cool as can be.
Rainbow Dash
I was once you,
Scared and short,
Alone and frightened,
Of little import.
Scootaloo
That's not true.
That ain't so,
You're the coolest,
You're Rainbow.
Rainbow Dash
They called me names,
Like Rainbow Crash,
They said I was lame,
That I would always be last,
Scootaloo
Well what changed sis,
How did you grow,
From a little wimp,
To my hero.
Rainbow Dash
I fought to be the best I could be,
To rise above what they thought of me,
I never gave up, I never gave in,
And I always fought to win.
Timmy Turner
So that's it, just try,
Keep working away,
What if I fall,
What if I fail anyway.
Rainbow Dash
If you lose, don't worry,
Here's what we'll do.
Scootaloo
We won't let you fall,
We'll be here to catch you,
Rainbow Dash
Everybody crashes,
And you lose sometimes,
Scootaloo
But you'll never be doomed,
With friends by your side.
Rainbow Dash
I fought to be the best I could be,
To rise above what they thought of me,
I never gave up, I never gave in
And I always fought to win
Canterlot Athletes
Go Rainbow!
Scootaloo
But even if you go down,
You can still rise to the top,
With friends to help you,
You can never stop.
Canterlot Athletes
And Scootaloo!
Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo
When we work together,
When we unite,
Then you'll never be nothing,
Your future will be always BRIGHT!
Canterlot Athletes
And Timmy too.
"So are you ready to stop feeling sorry for yourself?" Rainbow asked with a smile. A confident smile formed on Timmy's face.
"Yeah," Timmy Turner, "I know I'll do well."
"Good," Rainbow said. "Now drop and give me 60." Timmy began his pushups. Scootaloo immediately started doing them next to him.
It was with a smile, Rainbow noticed, that her sister like to follow whatever Timmy did.
"What do you mean you guys aren't coming?" Timmy asked his parents.
"Sorry Timmy," Mr. Turner said, "We have our spa treat-, I mean, get my badly needed physical therapy from all that pain I was in," Mr. Turner said, despite standing straight in the air.
"We'll see you later," Mrs Turner said quickly, before heading toward the door, as did Timmy's dad.
"I love-," Timmy began, only for them to slam the door. Timmy let out an annoyed sigh.
"Don't worry Timmy," Wanda said.
"Yeah," Cosmo said, "Sunset and Rainbow said they'd be there."
"And I bet when you're on the team," Wanda said with a confident smile, "your parents will have to show up at your track meets."
"You really believe in me?" Timmy asked his fairies.
"Yep," Cosmo said, "and not just because I bet my paycheck on you joining team." Timmy frowned.
"He's just messing with ya' sport," Wanda said, "right?" Wanda harshly whispered into her husband's ear.
"Well, not my paycheck," Cosmo said, causing Wanda to growl at him.
Timmy heard a honk outside. Timmy saw a fancy white car and approached it. He saw Sunset and Rainbow, in the passenger's and back seat, respectively. They both were wearing tank tops and short shorts in the warmer weather. Rainbow wore blue while Sunset wore orange. He also saw Rarity in the driver's seat, also dressed in the same way with purple and white, and Scootaloo, in the back as well, was wearing her regular attire. Rarity opened the window to her car.
"Hop in, darling," Rarity said.
"Rarity, Scootaloo," Timmy asked, "what are you doing here?"
"I wanted to see you win," Scootaloo said with an excited grin.
"I want to see you when you when swoon dear Trixie Tang off her feet," Rarity said. Scootaloo's face curled up, like she had swallowed a lemon. "Anyways, hop in."
"Where are your parents?" Sunset asked Timmy.
"They were busy," Timmy said with a frown.
"Don't worry," Rainbow said from the car with a surprisingly warm smile, "you'll have something to surprise them with." Timmy's confidence grew at that. "So come on in." Timmy was about to go to the left side, where Rainbow sat, only for Scootaloo to yell at him not too.
"What is it?" Timmy asked the purple-haired girl.
"Uh," Scootaloo stammered, "I think...Rainbow should have the most space. So why don't you come around and sit next to me?"
"Are you sure Scoots," Rainbow asked her little sister, "you don't mind being squished between me and Timmy."
"I just...want you to be comfortable, sis", Scootaloo stammered and staring down.
"Of course you do," Rainbow said with a teasing grin, that was shared by Sunset and Rarity. Timmy came in and sat down next to Scootaloo, who looked at Timmy with a smile.
"Anyways," Rainbow said, "let's head out."
Rarity pulled into the Dimmsdale parking lot, where other parents were pulling up along with their children.
Timmy and everyone else got out.
"I can't wait for you to win," Scootaloo gushed.
"Neither can we," a voice from the distance said. Timmy looked and saw Chester, AJ, Sanjay, and Elmer looking at him with happy smiles.
"Guys," Timmy said, sounding happy, "you're here to cheer me on?"
"That's because we're your friends," AJ said.
"And not because we're losers with nothing to do," Elmer said.
"Yes you are," Bob the Boil said, "accept it, and turn your hate toward world domination."
"Who are those guys," Chester said to the Canterlot group.
"Guys, meet my newest friends from Canterlot," Timmy began.
"Sunset, my temporary babysitter."
"Hey," Sunset said, waving to the already familiar Chester and AJ.
"My professor of romance, Rarity."
"Charmed." Rarity said.
"My newest friend, Scootaloo."
"What's up." Scootaloo said.
"And my personal trainer, Rainbow."
"What's happening." Rainbow said.
"She's your coach," Chester asked with some disbelief.
"Yeah," Timmy said, "why?". His friends snickered a bit, before laughing like crazy.
"What, dare I say, is amusing?" Rarity asked sternly.
"A girl who's good at sports," Chester said, finding the whole idea ludicrous, "that's hilarious."
"What sport id she teach you," AJ said while clutching his sides, "using makeup?"
"That's the dumbest thing I've ever heard," Elmer laughed. Sanjay and Elmer started laughing even more. They were so deep into laughter, they barely noticed Sunset, Rarity, and Rainbow's nasty smirks, Timmy's shut up gesture, and Scootaloo's increasingly red face.
"Guys," Timmy said in a warning tone. Someone let out a loud yell, which caused Timmy's four Dimmsdale friends to stop laughing. Before Chester knew it, he was being tackled to the ground. When Chester came to, he found Scootaloo on top of him, keeping him pinned. AJ backed away nervously as Scootaloo looked at him with a merciless gaze. With another yell, Scootaloo, brought AJ to he knees, arms pinned behind his back.
"Let me go," AJ said painfully, wincing as Scootaloo began twisting his arm and struggling to escape from the purple-haired girl's grasp.
"Say 'girls rule'," Scootaloo grunted.
"Girls rule," AJ squealed in pain.
"Now say 'Old MacDonald Had a Farm'!"
"Old MacDonald Had a Farm," AJ said in a pleading tone. Scootaloo let AJ go. Scootaloo then turned toward a fearful Elmer and Sanjay with a glare.
"Got a problem with girls, Mt. Zitmore?" Scootaloo yelled after getting into Elmer's face.
"No, sir," Elmer said nervously. Scootaloo got into Sanjay's face. "How about you, Four Eyes?!" Scootaloo roared.
"Not at all," the Indian kid said fearfully.
"That's what I thought," Scootaloo yelled. And then turned to a the crowd of assembled Dimmsdale students, who ran away when she glared at them.
"Scootaloo," Rainbow said in a warning tone of voice. The disappointed tone made Scootaloo feel regret, and she walked back toward her big sister. "What are you supposed to do when someone makes fun of you for being a girl?" Rainbow said.
"Make them acknowledge me as the Supreme Goddess of the planet," Scootaloo said with regret. "Sorry Rainbow."
"Don't worry," Rainbow said, putting a warm hand on Scootaloo's shoulder, "I'll let it slide this once since your my sister."
"Anyways," Chester said, "we should get going." The mixed Canterlot-Dimmsdale group marched into the school, where the ultimate showdown awaited.
Timmy walked onto the grassy field, wearing pink shorts and a pink vest. He was being given some last minute coaching by Rainbow. Rarity was there to provide moral support.
"Now remember, you just have to be in the top ten," Rainbow said, wearing a blue hat, "you just have to-
"Hey Turner," a snide voice said. Timmy saw Tad and Chad approaching him with nasty grins. They both wore lavender shorts and vests.
"Tad and Chad," Timmy said with some contempt in his voice.
"Oh so those are the two numbskulls I've heard about," Rainbow said with a smirk.
The two boys bristled. "How dare you," a female voice said. Two women approached them. Despite being middle-aged, they looked as young as college students. One was a blond haired and Caucasian, while the other was an African American with dark hair. Both women had hair that went down to their backs. They were tall, svelte, and wore designer lavender shorts, sleeveless purple blouses, and had designer sunglasses on.
"Never speak to my son that way," the blond woman said.
"Or mine," the African-American woman said.
"So you're Tad and Chad's moms," Timmy said.
"I'm Terry," Tad's mom said.
"And I'm Cherry," Chad's mom said. "And you must be Timmy Turner. I must say...you are not at all what my son described."
Timmy frowned. "Really?"
"Yes, you're even more unimpressive than i imagined," Tad's mom uttered. Tad and Chad and their moms laughed scornfully.
Rainbow bristled at that, especially when Timmy frowned defensively. "Hey don't talk to him like that!" Rainbow yelled.
Terry sneered at Rainbow with her sunglasses. "I'm sorry, I don't consort with the filth of society." Rainbow was about to throw a punch, but was held back by Rarity. "Rainbow," Rarity said in a scolding tone, "let us deal with them like civilized people. Behave as a proper lady does, with class and dignity, such as I."
"Someone who wears those shoes and those shorts in the same ensemble can't possibly be called proper," Cherry snarked.
Rarity frowned at the affront to her honor."Excuse me," Rarity said in an outraged tone.
"But by that way your hair is styled," Terry said with a smirk, ," you look as if someone glued a rag to your head."
Rarity began shaking at the insult to her hair. "Oh. It. Is. On." Rarity balled her fist, but was stopped by a whistle.
"If you want to fight," a flamboyant voice announced, "please do it on the track."
"Mr. Bickles," Timmy said in confusion. His effeminate drama teacher was wearing a black and white coach uniform, along with his usual red beret and scarf.
"Please let us not bring unnecessary drama," the man said, acting as if he was on stage, "and escalate this situation into tragedy." Tad and Chad, along with their moms, walked away with a shrug, but not before giving one last smug look at Timmy.
"That guy is the track coach," Rainbow said with disbelief.
"Why are you the coach?" Timmy said.
"Well," the man said jovially, "it has always been my dream to coach track."
"Really?" Timmy asked the man.
"Well that and budget cuts," the man said. "Union cowards," Mr. Bickles muttered angrily under his breath. "Just get into position," the man said, his smile returning on his face. "The games are about to begin."
"I guess this is where we leave you," Rainbow said.
"Good luck Timmy," Rarity said, "and swear that you will avenge my honor."
"I will," Timmy said. When they were gone, he took a deep breath, and steeled himself to his task.
Timmy stood assembled along with his competitors on the running track. They all looked at each other with deep suspicion, except for Chad and Tad, who looked smug. Timmy felt a mixture of fear and resolve. The fear grew when he looked at Trixie, who didn't look at him with any sympathy, and the large crowd of boys and girls cheering for Tad and Chad. But his resolve grew when he looked at his fairies, disguised as water bottles, his Dimmsdale friends, and his Canterlot friends. When he looked at Sunset, and her pretty smile, he felt something...weird. It wasn't a crush. It was...a feeling he got when he looked at Cosmo and Wanda, and his parents...sometimes.
He knew that Sunset would just...be there for him.
"Eleven of you have assembled," Mr. Bickles said, "but there are only ten spots. You all have to run three laps. First person to cross will be made captain. Last person can't join. On the count of three. 1...2...3!" Bickles fired a flare into the sky, and everyone started running.
Everyone began cheering at shouting encouragements. Timmy's support group frowned when they saw after two laps, Timmy was still in last place, while Tad and Chad were in first place.
"Timmy's going, really slow," Elmer said with some disappointment.
"Yeah," Sunset commented, until he noticed Rainbow and Scootaloo looking at with him with satisfied smiles. "Is this part of some plan?" Sunset asked Rainbow with a serious look.
"You'll see," Rainbow said with a wicked smile. Sunset looked at them in confusion, but sat back and paid attention to Timmy.
As the second lap ended, Timmy saw himself in last place. Instead of being annoyed he smiled. He still felt like he had energy, while everyone looked tired.
He imagined Scootaloo stealing his hat away. The rage and anger did the trick. He soon began to speed up, and using his saved energy, and soon began surpassing everyone.
"It appears Timmy Turner is begin to overtake everyone," the announcer said. "He's gone from 11th, to tenth. Now he's going ninth. Eight. Seventh."
Everyone in Timmy's support group felt their jaws drop in shock and amazement.
"How's he doing that?" Chester wondered with amazement as his best friend began overtaking everyone.
"Oh I see," AJ said with a knowing smile, "he's began conserving his ATP while others exhausted it in the opening part of the race."
He saw everyone giving him a blank stare, not understanding his technobabble.
"You mean, slow and steady wins the race," Sunset asked the bald boy.
"Pretty much," AJ said with shrug. Everyone turned and saw Timmy was overtaking more and more of the competitors.
"Timmy's now in sixth....," the announcer bellowed, "now he's fifth. Now he's forth..Now he's third! He's gaining on Chad and Tad"
Trixie Tang watched Timmy moved with shock and amazement. And maybe a little bit of admiration toward the buck-toothed boy.
"Come on Timmy!" Rainbow gushed.
"You can do it!" Scootaloo chirped.
Sunset, lost in the excitement as Timmy appeared to be winning the race suddenly jumped up and started cheering Timmy on.
"COME ON TIMMY!" Sunset shouted enthusiastically. "I believe in you!" Soon he was followed by Timmy's Dimmsdale friends, who began letting out their own cheers.
Timmy smiled. He was only a few feet behind Tad and Chad. His face was red, and knees burned, but seeing his friends, especially Sunset, cheering him on.
This was it. He was gaining on them. He might not only get to join the team, he might even become team-
He felt something slam into his ankle, and suddenly collapsed to the ground, his face painfully hitting the track, as did his fellow competitors.
One of the kids, a fat kid, fell onto Timmy's leg, crushing his ankle.
"Ahh," Timmy said, letting out a grunt of pain.
Silence fell over the whole audience in the bleachers, as they watched all the kids collapsed.
Tad and Chad were the first boys to reach the finish line with smug smiles. The other boys got up, while Timmy struggled to get up.
"Timmy what's wrong?" Wanda asked Timmy, who was gritting his teeth in agony.
"My ankle," Timmy whined, growling in what was obvious pai. Even "I wish it was better."
Cosmo and Wanda raised their wands, only to be met with the raspberry noise.
"What?"
"Sorry, sport, we can't help you in the competition," Cosmo said with disdain.
Timmy tried running, but he was in so much pain. The other boys were able to get ahead of him. Still he struggled to run.
Everyone in Timmy's cheering section watched this with no small amount of disappoinment. "Timmy got last," Scootaloo said with disbelief.
"Look at him," AJ said with concern, "I think he's hurt." The word 'hurt' caused Sunset to jump up, and she ran down the bleachers when she saw Timmy collapsing onto the ground.
"Timmy," Wanda asked with concern.
"Are you OK," Cosmo said.
"No," Timmy said, in the verge of tears from the pain and the shame of being in dead last. His sorrow faded a bit when he saw Sunset running toward him.
"Timmy," Sunset said, scooping the ten year old into a hug, "are you OK? What happened?"
"What happened?" Mr. Bickles said, apporaching the boy and Sunset with concern in his voice.
"I don't know", Timmy said, his voice revealing he was in pain, "something tripped us."
"Well sorry Turner," Tad gloated with a mean grin.
"See you next fall," Chad said. Sunset turned to glare at the two brats, when her eyes suddenly widened as she had an epiphany.
"Did you say something tripped you?" Sunset asked with a fierce gaze.
"Yeah," Timmy said. Sunset got up, and began investigating the track. For some reason, Tad and Chad looked shocked and when she began examining the area where all the kids tripped.
"Wait," Tad said to Sunset.
Sunset turned to face the popular boy. "Yeah," Sunset said, a stern expression on her face.
"You're not gonna find anything there," Chad claimed. Sunset's suspicion grew."Really," Sunset said, a glare on her face. Mr.
Bickles himself grew suspicious too. "How would you two know?"
"Uh," Chad said, "we'll pay you to...leave." Sunset became even more determined than ever. In the dirt path, she found a massive rope that, due to its color, was hidden from site in the dirt. She pulled, and saw it extended across the track, to some flimsy cabin in the distance. Everyone in the room was shocked at the discovery. With a massive tug, Sunset brought the walls of the cabin down, revealing a very tall man in pink clothing.
"Hey," Timmy said angrily, "that's Tad and Chad's bodyguard!" The two chuckled nervously as everyone turned to glare at them. Sunset, who ran back to Timmy and pulled him into a hug, gave them a look that could kill.
Other people were glaring at the bodyguard, who looked utterly embarassed. "What," he said defensively, "I'm just making a living."
Mr. Bickles stormed up to the two popular kids with a cold, angry expression."So you two decided to cheat," the man said in a stern tone that lacked its usual flamboyance.
"Mr. Bickles," Tad said feebly.
"Who are you gonna believe," Chad, "some poor kid or-,"
"Not only that," the man said, "but you injured one of your classmates."
"But-,"
"Tad, Chad. I have no choice but to-," Mr. Bickles paused as he found a sack of money being shoved into his face.
"Surely a...donation to the track team can help to make amends," Terry said with a wicked smile on her face, waving the bag of currency in his face.
"You think I'm gonna sell out for a sack of money," Mr. Bickles said, looking at the woman with an unimpressed expression.
Sunset smiled proudly at the man for keeping his integrity.
"How about two sacks of money," Cherry said, offering her own.
"Deal," Mr. Bickles said, happily taking the "donation". "Tad and Chad are our new track captains." Timmy looked dismayed, while Sunset, Rarity, Scootaloo, Rainbow, Chester, AJ, and Sanjay, and Elmer looked outraged.
"Come on," Scootaloo said, walking up to the other track runners with a glare, "you guys aren't gonna let those jerks get away with it are you?!"
They all looked uneasy. "Well," one of them with a green shirt stammered.
"Uh," Tad began, "Party at my house tonight to celebrate."
"Everyone except Turner and his dweebs are invited," Chad said.
"Tad and Chad are the greatest," the green-shirted boy declared.
"What?" an outrage Scootaloo declared. "But they-,"
The other competitors began cheering "Tad and Chad". Sunset, Rarity and Rainbow began looking at everyone, except Timmy's friends, with outrage and disgust, especially as the rich brats started being carried by other competitors and lifted into the air.
Sunset especially glared at the two brats with a fury she never felt before, and the red beret man for accepting a bribe. Timmy didn't say anything but looked utterly...broken. Sunset's anger faded and was replaced by sympathy. She ignored those idiots, her attention directed to the boy who needed it.
Trixie, from her bleacher, found herself looking at Tad and Chad with disgust, and looking at Timmy, injured and defeated, with pity.
"Trixie, are you coming," Veronica said. Trixie ignored her gal pal, unable to stop the feeling of sorrow for the buck tooth boy. She finally could justify leaving when she saw Timmy getting a hug from his new babysitter, and his other friends going in to comfort him. She was glad someone was.
And yet, she still felt dirty going to a party with Tad and Chad.
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wow. that was jest cold of those two boys..... and there moms. i hope karma pays them back big time.
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In the form of the Canterlot High Track Team throwing bricks.
I think Timmy's school needs a Von Strangle style overhaul.
Yeah the adults in this show are idiots
Oh I hope those two jerks pay dearly for what they and their mothers did.
He lied on the ground with despair. - I'm pretty sure this should be "lay" and not "lied".
As for the chapter, ouch. Not just for Timmy getting hurt due to cheating, but for the blatant corruption Dimmsdale has. I mean good grief, they didn't even bother to hide the bribery and just did it out in the open. Timmy and his guy friends are used to it, but the girls from Canterlot must be as disgusted as they are in disbelief. I wonder if they'll mention this to Principle Celestia? She might be interested to hear about corruption in a neighboring school administration. Also, it's too bad that Timmy didn't win after he tried his hardest. Hopefully, this doesn't discourage him too much.
As a side note, it would seem that while she went along with it, Trixie was having a bit of a moral dilemma. It's nice to see her getting some kind of character development, even if she hasn't quite made it to the point of being herself just yet.
If anybody remembers the time that Cosmo had to get back at Wandismo he was turned into a snail and yelled REVENGE!!!!!
Maybe sunset and her friends should convince Timmys brainless parents to move him to Canterlot high instead of the corrupt Dimmsdale school
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Is that why they let Fluttershy abuse him? Does Chloe appear in this story?
I wish that Chad and Tad's families have to file for bankruptcy and then sued so hard that they have to have worse than Timmy.
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it dimmesdale it rewards that mindset they going to grow up to the most important people in town.
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i hope.
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then the town is doomed.
Oh oh, the girls will not let this go easily, Rainbow Dash will do something, I can feel it.
Question the girls of EG is the same one after the camp everfree where they received their magic? Because it would be really fun to see Rainbow Abuse her powers just to make a supreme prank on the kids. Maybe even dragging Gilda along. Because her pranks are another level.
Ah yeah I forgot that the rich kids generally get away with anything with the help of the occasional bribe.
You disappoint me, Trixie. But at least you have enough of a conscience to feel bad about your choices. There’s hope for you yet.
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I think she actually does care for him...
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This is before Camp Everfree.
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ALthough that would be awsome, at this point in time, she shouldn't appear, perhaps if there is a 3 or 4 arc, by that point, sunset needs to become timmy's permanent babysitter, advert some alien invation or two, defeat Crokker's attempt at world domination at least once, and some other stuff ebfore Chloe appears in her own arc XD.
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READ The Dang description and other comments. This is set BEFORE Friendship Games
Do you have this story already finished. You keep out putting quality chapters regularly which is awesome.
I'm calling it now the Mega wand uses a stone of desire to grant the fairies power Da Rulez are a limit as a way to keep the Stone's side effects from manifesting and human belief in fairies is the way to recharge this Stone also Dinkelberg has another in his trophy case and has unknowingly been using its powers to keep wining and getting the things he has it would be a family heirloom to cover Dinkelberg's nice guy bit since only Mr Turner and Dash sense the wrongness
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No.
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sorry dude, I didn't know alright? LOL, but the other answer already clarified to me, so thanks for answering as well. XD
Can Rainbow and Sunset just beat Tad and Chad up, or something else? Bankrupt them, blow their mansion up. Make them ugly, SOMETHING. PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD MAKE THEM SUFFER!
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That's what happens when you take two shows from two different genres and put them together. Fairly Oddparents is akin to a Looney Toons show, where logic, reason and law basically mean nothing, thus such blatant corruption works, while Equestria Girls is more a slice of life/magical girl series with a bit more logic and sense to it.
That also is what makes these two series coming together so fun because of the contrast.
Okay got caught up. I like the balance and interactions between the two worlds. Normally that's not easy to do for crossovers between shows with such a big difference in tone and laws of reality. But you are really good at using the Oddparent's humorous logic to sidestep the weirdness from the world's colliding and using the morals and themes of EqG to move the plot along in reasonable directions. Good job, looking forward to more.
I would love to see Rarity's reaction to Gah! Timmy's Norwegian Supermodel alter ego.
I think this might be the first time I could root for Cinch if she was told about this. Though a thing like this could be even better to be sat before Neighsay, provided he is the Superintendent.
They keep pushing like this and Sunset will have no choice but to use her powers for "evil" again and I don't think her friends would be willing to stop her. This Rainbow would probably join in, if not most of the rest of them.
I just notice that didn’t they actually cut Trixie in the last few seasons of the show?
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Change can happen, but it is very gradual.
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That describes most people. We feel bad, but not bad enough to want to change.
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That was my original plan to get Timmy to meet the Rainbooms: Timmy is forced to go to Canterlot for reasons, and he disguises himself as his 16 year old self.
I now want Tad and Chad to burn in hell for deliberately sabotaging the race just to stay in there vapid popular club and for showing no remorse for Timmy getting hurt.
That bodyguard should at least be charged for assault on a minor
Hope there’s karma against the two bullies like their parents end up in a scandal or make terrible bsuesinnes decisions that leaves them broke
To everyone decrying the blatant corruption and defeat of our heroes... I suggest patience, and maturity.
There are two ways this could go... one, these guys never get punished and the heroes must accept it, grow, and move on, leaving childhood bullies behind as a commentary on the basic unfairness and nastiness of the world...
or Two: The way of the universe is LONG, but it tends toward JUSTICE.
What goes around comes around, and these awful children and parents will have their punishment one day.
Ah, wonderful magical Dimmsdale. Where everyone is honestly loyal to the kind generosity of whoever or whatever promises the magic of laughter.
That frankly sounded better in my head.
... Okay, I'm not the only one, right? I thought it was suspicious when the CMC got demoted from Freshmen to Grade Schoolers, but all of Timmy's interactions with them are starting to clinch it for me; is Timmy getting a harem? I mean, I doubt that he'd get in a romantic relationship with 4(+?) girls at 10 or something crazy like that, but these interactions seem a bit more than just friends... unless...
*Throws out stupid shipping heart in the laundry where it belongs.
There we go, that's better.
Stupid Shipping Heart:...
*Sigh* Fine, you can come back.
SSH:
All right, for a second I thought it was Applejack who said this, but then I remembered that one of Timmy's best friends is named AJ and I'm a dummy.
*Oh
SSH: Lies! All of it; dirty lies!
Darn it, I knew you couldn't be trusted!
What is wrong with me; I thought she was the other Trixie for a second there.
Come to think of it, doesn't Veronica have a crush on Timmy?
Again I ask. "We're supposed to think they give a damn about Timmy?"
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Well in their defense, they did at some point, considering they had recorded every waking moment of his life until he was 8. And there have been times where they do show pride in him at times.
The main problem is, they’re just idiots.
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That’s she does. Veronica (in the early seasons at least) did show she had a secret crush on Timmy ( though, to use your Harem analogy, she was more of the yandere type.)
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Well, first of all, Timmy's 10 years old. He'd probably have to go to elementary school instead of high school.
Second, that place has snobs to. Remember Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon.
Hahahahhahahahahahah!
I must admit writing this as a cartoon episode is almost as amusing as watching it were it to be animated
Yes... yes... such ambition. Good.... indulge in it, prove you are the master, the ruler. Teach them their place
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Considering that Cinch blackmailed one of her own students, I think she would be the kind of person who is susceptible to bribery, albeit not as shamelessly as Mr. Bickles is.
When it said that a fat kid fell on Timmy's leg, it wasn't clear to me that it was another one of the contestants. I thought some fat kid had just fallen out of the sky, or out of the stands, as part of the trap. For FOP, that's not completely removed from the realm of possibility.
With all this humiliation being thrown Timmy's way, there's one element it feels like the story is neglecting. Cosmo and Wanda. Obviously they can't help him win the race. But it feels like you're not utilizing their full magical potential, in terms of just wacky shenanigans or Timmy's ability to improvise solutions. Like wishing that Bickles had integrity to fight the bribe. He could also just say out "I wish this didn't hurt so much." Cosmo and Wanda could work with that to help with his leg, and no one around him would question why he was saying it. And of course, he'll probably be wishing for a colony of skunks to set up shop underneath Tad's floorboards.
A few problems with this. One is that just feels very transparent and kind of cloying. But I'm also confused by how this scene is supposed to be set up. How close to the action is Trixie that you can actually hear Timmy? Also, with his friends comforting him, and I assume helping take the pressure off his sprained leg, I thought he wasn't at the point of whimpering. Just morose.
Huh... guess Applebloom was right after all
*here
*Goddess
Add " after cuts,
That's where it stops speaking and goes into descriptive words.
That, my pink-hatted friend, is what we call a "Deus ex machina".
You know, Cosmo doing that is actually extremely trusting, no one would bet on someone a bit of money without believing in them, but that much ?