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luckyboys121


Just here mainly to comment on and like other peoples stories. Might right a few myself because I love the show and want to give back but I am also lazy so we'll see what happens

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When Twilight went to the human world she was on verge of having a mental breakdown at seeing her new body and all the strange things around her. Luckily for her, she had her faithful assistant Spike there to keep her from going off the deep end and doing something she'd regret.

Unluckily for THIS Twilight though, Spike didn't go with her and she had to deal with this all alone... this can only end in disaster

Contains: property destruction through stress eating, a description of the human body from someone who knows nothing about it followed by casual nudity, and ALOT of awkwardness from everyone except Twilight. Contains no sexual acts, tag only present for the aforementioned nudity jokes

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In resume, if Spike doesn't go to the human world, Twilight definitely goes directly to arkham asylum along with her others counterparts

Also, the ultimate end of Equestria, WAY the go Celestia
:pinkiecrazy:

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Equestria's fine. The principal gave Sunset the wrong crown. But hey, now she and Twilight can be in the madhouse together!

Came expecting something 100% better. Disapointed this was it. No idea why you had it devolve into Twilight in a loony bin, and pretty much the same with Sunset.

Would've been cooler if that was removed and we just had Twilight go through the first Equestria Girls as we know it. Just without Spike.

Which was what I was expecting.

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Thank you for your feedback and I'm sorry this story wasn't what you where looking for, but the joke of this story was that without Spike to keep Twilight calm, focused, and rational Equestria Girls just wouldn't have happened as we know it.

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Says you. I'd like to think that, yes things would be different without Spike there to help. But I doubt it would become this.

Just my two cents though.

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Fair point, and while I disagree I respect it :twilightsmile:

Spike is sure so needed for Twilight there.
Without him, she be screwed here.
If only the writers had him be human though.. he can clearly be moral support for her like he did in the movie but also can do much more.

is there gonna be a sequel

“So.. you where a pony princess?” said Raven, a girl who thought her father was a demon, blushing.

you were*

Despite this was a bit different than I thought I do like the way it turned out, even if some nude some involved. A great story nevertheless on what if Twilight went to the human world without Spike. And tbt I'm glad he did or else chaos would happen and twilight would not only embarrass herself but make people around her think she's a lunatic. :twilightoops:

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