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Bernard


Old medically retired first responder and farmer with an urge to grow in a new direction.

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And here we go! Lines have been drawn and battle will rage with two OP Alicorns!

If she cannot learn to trust I cannot see this working at all. Even if they would become lovers, how long before she snaps and turns on him because of some hidden fear. Or lets say their children when she realizes how powerful they are, and that they listen to daddy more than mom because of how she is acting.

Mares and Gentlecolts, LETS GET READY TO RUMBLE.

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Yep, every Saturday is the plan.

If fimfiction stays up after mlp ends we will see more stories like this, stories that are set in the future of equestria and I love it

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All it takes is a will. If fimfic goes down, someone will open fimfic2 a few days later.

And that is how you show ''Unstoppable'' Force Meets Unstoppable Force!

I am very interested in seeing a Griffon Alicorn. Is there a chance that the changelings will appear at some point in the story? I have a changeling hive you could use called the Shadow Hive Kingdom.

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You'll get at least one of your wishes.

BTW, don't assume this is the last story. There's a lot of room for adventure when you're dealing with immortals.

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Ok, how many stories in this version of Equestria do you have planned? You don't have to tell me if you don't have a set number yet.

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A hint: I grew up on writers like Robert Heinlein and E E Smith, writers that fitted forty novels into a universe.

It's stompin time boys! It's time to krump and stomp and WWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH! Some dragon gitz and dey' boss too!

Yes, yes, yes, more, more, MORE!

Quick question since I think the last two chapters were posted post the S9 epilogue should we be envisioning the Twilight from that epilogue or is there a fan made model that we should be imagining?

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We're all growing up and going beyond the show. I mean, just because others have left off the story early in the life of the characters doesn't mean they aren't still interesting. I intentionally skipped some years to avoid conflicts with story not written when I began my vision but they are intended to be more extension that completely new. Of course mortals get left behind.

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So use the epilogue version of Twilight when we envision this Twilight while we read it?

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Yes. I want to have a coherent universe across all the stories but enough development within each story for it to stand on it's on. Twilight and Celestia are going to come back to the foreground one of these days.

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Now that we’ve connected the universes I’d kinda want to know what Luster Dawn did in her life or even better make her a descendant of John when he was a female

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Both Bud and Swift Trail have stories to tell. I may have to recruit help to get them all down.

That Gryphon is an Alicorn!

That Changeling is an Alicorn!

That Diamond Dog is an Alicorn!

That Dragon is an Alicorn!

Every race has an Alicorn!

This... is getting a little ridiculous.

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You missed a point. It's the mind and will that make ascension possible and only a few individuals from each generation have the potential. John is looking farther and wider for candidates because he needs help running Equestria and not burning out. I wonder why the sun is in such a hurry, though? I guess we'll have to go along and see.

Looky 'were boyz, we gotz 'urselfz a stupid git of a idiot, tinkin datz dey can do w'atever dey wantz, so we iz gonna start krumpin and stompin deez deer and dey so called king!

Wow, I feel bad that the Deer are doing this.

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Watch those articles. They matter.

If the main OCs in this story and the previous one were voiced, what would they sound like?

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That would require some thought. John would have a Texas accent for sure. Swift Trail would sound like a Marine from somewhere Southern US.

Yay, your back! I am interested in knowing about what irl thing set you back from posting for a few months.

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Me too. I am just now getting back to strength and cognition needed to unravel the mess I made out of the coming chapters. There will be rewrites and updates.

Think positive! The damned virus is leaving me with more time to write.

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I am positive about being negative. You cannot create something without destroying something. Like killing some time and making some words. :raritywink:

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