This story is a sequel to Sunspots
The day after receiving a spanking from Princess Celestia to relieve her of her guilt, Sunset Shimmer goes to have a cup of coffee with Wallflower Blush. It turns out that she is carrying a lot of emotional burden as well, and Sunset wants to help her out any way she can.
Too bad neither of them are really prepared for it.
Spoiler: Story contains a consensual non-sexual spanking
Rated teen because of some non-sexual non-explicit nudity.
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Very engaging. Love Sunset's care towards Wallflower.
I love the way you built up their dynamic and the shared guilt. The hug was heartwarming.
The cuddle was cute. That spanking scene was very emotional, I loved it, especially the scene where Wallflower gave Sunset the hairbrush.
Also, CPS needs to be informed about Wallflower's living situation.
9786433 I don't think CPS really cares because even Sunset can have her own apartment without even having legal ID or even existing.
I just wanted to show that even at home, Wallflower is invisible. At first I thought that she's have normal parents and be utterly overshadowed by a very extroverted and attention-whorey older sibling, but that felt like an unneeded complication for the focus of this story. I don't like to introduce new characters if not absolutely possible, because every single OC is one step further away from canon and setting.
This was amazinly good! I have to agree with RoyalBard on this. I loved how Sunset handled things. It was very believable, emotional, and overall well done.