Two friends end up in Equestria, destined to protect it form the forces of evil. But what would happen when an evil so great and terrifying threatens the land? Will the friends be able to stand up to this foe? Or will they fall to darkness?
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9784434
Transformer animated, the generation after g1 transformers
I mistook this for a parody earlier.
Please for the love of God, tell me this is a parody.
OR A TROLL! PLEASE, THIS HAS TO BE A TROLL!
What
The fuck.
You realize your character basically said his costume is Sonichu right?
9784772
Hey, other people make their ocs op
9784663
What a parody
9786092
OP characters can work, this one doesn't. It's just a neverending cavalcade of how awesome he is, and the result is a story that breaks the cardinal sin of writing.
Its BORING.
Be bad. Be awesome. Be so awful you're something to gape at. But NEVER be boring. Mary Sues are boring. Here is the definition of a Mary Sue in your story.
9786572
if you guys think its so bad, why u keep reading it?
you could just forget you ever saw this,
9786924
Because you can do better.
9788887
?
9789155
Because you can do better.
9789155
what i think they mean is that by the standards of your other things this is just you saying look how awesome i am
When will you publish the next chapter?
He is too op he has to have some weakness personality traits besides happiness maybe he has anger issues maybe no pony will like him because he is different? You have to give him som personality or else he will just a cookie-cutter Gary-Stu maybe he is unlucky? Maybe he has no sense of directions maybe animals are afraid or even out-right hate him? What ever it is a good enough negative to balance out the positive I hope this story gets better
9939694
Maybe you guys should be patient, as I am working on the next chapter to make it to your freaking liking, or maybe I should give up on my FIRST OC story
9939760
OH sorry man I didn’t realize can you for give me I didn’t mean to offend you like I obviously did
9940136
Its cool, just having a hard time trying to make my OC to everyone's liking, but these are still the beginning chapters, things will get better
9940479
Basically what everyone's asking: Try to make him act like that of a human, make them a little relatable to the reader. He may have powers, but he lacks experience and knowledge of those powers. He is a human, humans make mistakes, they have problems mentally or physically that makes them imperfect. Take Saitama for example, he's overpowered, but he suffers from depression and longing for someone to give him a worthy challenge. Most of the time, he's drained of emotion, like there's no point in him getting excited since all the villains he fights ends in one punch.
I like this, and hope to see more soon
10034702
I’m curious have you ever heard of ChristenWestinChandler I think his name was?
I pretty sure you need to re you chapter before release.
"Me and friend"
I'm not the only one that saw this right? If it was me it'd be "I and a friend" because if I used that trick it would be about "Me and friend were" which can be changed to "I was" but because there was someone else it would turn to "I and a friend"
Im tired of seeing so many fic's with so many errors it'ss hurting me.
Anyways I'm enjoying the story so far!
Is this a parody? I'm just curious since you've featured Sonichu, used ambiguous initialisms and literally wrote "brownies" instead of "bronies".
9786924
I... apologize for how I have previously acted I was needlessly mean spirited and I regret my actions.
Thank you and
Good bye
9940479
I’m sure they will
hay when are you going to update this story? stop wasting time
11506523
sorry, I had honestly forgotten that I had posted this story but I will be updating it
9786924
I for one just found this and just read through all of it and can positively say 100%..it's up there in the good ones.
Not to go read a mlp sao story
Would've been nice to see more chapter
11507909
i found this when i first read my first and favorite displaced story but if what i have seen from it is that yours might become my third second or even first favorite displaced story
11725027
Wait really? You liked it that much?
11725034
No just from what I read in another author's story that had this story as a link am waiting to see if it gets updated before I read it
11725047
ah, ok.
11725047
What story was it? Just asking out of curiosity
11725069
Sorry was late when I saw that but it was the Equestrian anti-magic knight
11725069
going to read the story after i finish the one i am one since it also lead to this it is the gamer one this time