Just here mainly to comment on and like other peoples stories. Might right a few myself because I love the show and want to give back but I am also lazy so we'll see what happens
After learning that the Mane 6 and Luna are away on a friendship mission, Chrysalis, Tirek, and Cozy Glow want to attack Canterlot while only Celestia remains. Grogar however is adamant against it so they do the only thing they know how to... disobey his orders and attack anyway. Upon doing so though, they learn exactly why he said no and wish they had listened.
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I'll let Vegeta speak for me about this one.
On the one hand this phrase feels a little incongruous from Grogar given what we’ve seen of his character; on the other I imagine he has his Bewitching Bell on the mind so there’s something oddly delightful about him saying it.
Don’t mess with he Sun, kids.
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Haha, glad you like it
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Thank you for getting that pun (to be honest I wasn't sure if anyone would notice
OH COME ON CELESTIA!!!!
Couldn't you have at least given them a fighting chance..... out of sports-pony-ship?
Great.... now i need to fine MORE villains......
Hmmmm i wonder if Dizzy will be willing to join with me again.
Weird. This is the kind of silly that usually goes to the Box.
Aaanyways. Proofreaf your text, learn the difference between your and you're and while you're at it, their, they're and there. The usual stuff. 8/10 would laugh again. Was a 7 but the ending with Cozy was witty.
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There's always villains from other world's...like DC.
I wouldn't recommend the Joker because of his unpredictability. Then again, saying that he doesn't take not being invited to the party very well is kind of an understatement.
https://youtu.be/rfNBGMUjhBs?t=33
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Thank you for pointing that out (those are issues I've been tracking to work at for awhile but am still struggling with
Just did another editing pass and I think I got them all, but feel free to tell me anything I missed
This is so weird and random that I love it.
Also, the TFS references are 10/10
It's what Sunset Shimmer did.
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Her big Sister
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Yup
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That could be a good fic, as they see how together they can rule and ally (before she reformed)...
HAHAHAHAHA!
dies laughing
Great, now I'm just hearing Celestia voiced by either Vegeta or Piccolo.
Certainly hilarious
Wished we see Luna getting to show off her prowess too like Celestia did.
About the whole "it was a test" thing her crappy plan of dumping their magic on Twilight in Twilight's Kingdom, I guess that's the only "logical" reasoning she had on why she came up with such a flawed plan. Though sadly these "tests" she came up with like the Crystal Empire and the Tirek mess is practically at the expense of Luna there with her being sidelined or get humiliated.
Oh gawd that ending!
Ok but the fact that Tartarus has meatloaf on Thursdays XD
That ending was just perfect.
Awwwww...wait what?
*cackles* That was hllarious! Well done!