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nature of force


howdy, might take me a bit to get rolling but once i do be ready for some chaos

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in a land of Magic is there really any need for an engineer? no? well how about one who specializes in weapons of war in a land of peace? no? well that sucks. time for an adventure! follow our gun totin, violence lovin' "hero" as he tries to find his way in a land of peace. will he succeed? will he survive?

will the author stop using questions?

will be adding tags as they appear in the story, wouldn't want to give anything away now would we?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 6 )

I noticed that not all of the sentences begin with wit a capital letter and a few full stops and commas are missing, but it was an okay read.

Not a red and black alicorn:pinkiesmile:

1148731 ruin is going to be taking a bit of a break...plus ol gearbox needed a story of his own lol

Seriously, your writing in this has impressed me greatly. It's coming along nicely, and I will certainly be following it.

Good work, but one thing to keep in mind: capital letters are your friends.

hey i made a story about my pony gear box i...... ocward:rainbowderp:

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