At the edge of the Everfree forest, a small cottage where Fluttershy, lived in the cottage was always kind to every living creature. But she learns and keep a secret form every pony.
At the edge of the Everfree forest, a small cottage where Fluttershy, lived in the cottage was always kind to every living creature. But she learns and keep a secret form every pony.
I think you mean "Prologue". An epilogue comes at the end of a story, not the beginning.
err 'Thread'? what's a Thread pony?
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They are Bat ponies.
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Then why call them Threads? Why not just call them bat ponies?
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To fully understand it they haven't really gotten the best attention from the Ponies and therefore made them feel unwelcome in Pony society. So they decided to get rid of the Pony name and choose their own name for their race.
P.S. To be honest I think it sounds a little more interesting then Bat Pony.
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What about thesterals? That's what most fans call them. Er, not that I'm criticizing your decisions.
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Thestrals are even more stupid a name than bat ponies. Plus they look nothing like the Thestrals in Harry Potter.
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Chiroptera sounds so much better and more original name.
Why didn't you respond to my comment?
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Yes I did and it is a interesting suggestion
When I first saw this story's title, I thought of an old show called "Huntik: seekers and secrets".
Edit: it's actually called "Huntik: secrets and seekers"...
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So you think it's similar to that show.
And before you ask yes I seen that show.
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There are 3 similarities of bat ponies and thestrals:
1. Pony-like body with bat-like wings.
2. The connection between the undead and vampire-like entities.
3. The name has a connection to the dark/night...
i.postimg.cc/LsYhgXTR/Screenshot-20210813-231751-Chrome.jpg
ALTHOUGH, having an original/different name is definitely not a bad idea if it fits well enough.
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I was talking about the title, haven't read yet... uhhh... sorry. I will certainly be when I can.
Sorry...
It’s all right
Are the rest of Fluttershy's family going to be playing a major role in this story?
no its just her and her mom
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do you want more Zepher Breeze?
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I wouldn't mind that, as long as he isn't bashed. Are you accepting OCs in this story?
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in a way Yes
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did you had one in mind
look like this book is a relic of the past, a little too specist for me. I'm not surprised if they included every other race than ponies like the griffon into the "Monster" section
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Interesting thought and I suppose the term monsters is loosely based in my story.
P.S. I am sorry if I offended you.
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A full list of all of my My Little Pony OCs can be found here. You can choose any of them, I honestly think any one of them would fit your story. I also have a lot more Touhou OCs if you’re interested. Please respond to this comment.
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Interesting list of characters But unfortunately it may be too late to use them in my current Fanfiction but I may consider to use them in another Fanfiction.