I'm writing to improve my English, (dyslexia) instead of a thumbs down, please leave a comment with what you didn't like and what you think I can do to get better. in advance thank you <3
Amina being born with the mark of the shaman, she gets raised as a shaman and trained in the way of the warrior. One night a fire breaks out in the camp and Amina is kidnapped with others from her tribe. They are loaded into boxes and the boat sails out to the sea. Amina wondering who zebranapt them and where are headed?
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Did you mean to strikethrough the binomial name at the start instead of italicising it?
What’s the pony version of India?
There are a lot of spelling mistakes. I could proofread if you want.
That being said, I like that you wrote about zebras. I don’t see that very often.
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hello Nitro Indigo
thank you and for the strikethrough is for If was anyone whats interested in searching for the tree, it will not be mentioned but i can put them in the box below insted.
and yes in the show there is 2 pony that is having Indian appearance and dialect, they have curls on their ears but ordinary horns, so that is to give readers a viable help to '' see '' him. sadly the show has not shown us it but i bet there is :D <3
and yes i am having 2 friends looking the stuff over, and i am typing in American English. But thank you very very much for your time and help <3
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Why did you delete your comment and then repost it? I wasn't notified the first time, but I read it.
What I meant was that India doesn't exist in Equestria's world.
Well in the serie they have not said it but you can clearly see the diffrent on the ears and horns from normal unicorns and ‘chines/mistmanes’ type of unicorn, to the unicorns that works in the taisty treat resturang from the epesode (spice up your life) with rarity and pinkie pie
Link:
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=dGM4410KRRY
Even silver quill a brony analyse talks aboute it :)
Link- https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=VTggNAafW14
Hope This helps and very sorry for the deleit and repost, i am not 100% sure if i cam just posting a new comment or awnsering on your comment. Very sorry for the confuson😢😔