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dirty little secret
I tried so far… and got so hard… but in the end, it didn't even matter at all. (Direct Support)
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Another story by DLS?
*Unzips pants*
Here we go!
9872290
Heh, this one is apparently not very popular, though. And I’m not sure why ... haven’t had a story bomb this badly in quite a while.
9872883
I can't imagine why, this story is great! I'd love to see more.
I would also very much like to see more
9872965
Cover image, maybe? Or maybe people just aren’t liking the prostitution angle.
9873094
What would more of this even be ... just more of the same? Where would a story like this go from here?
9873408
Show some of their developing relationship while Twilight tries out some of her more crazy fantasies. A sweet date before a messy gangbang that ends romantically. You could go anywhere with it, really. A blank slate for fetishes.
I think you did this very well, and I like pretty much everything about it. The kind of story I look for. Cover art threw me off, but I tried it out for the tags.
9873488
Aha! I knew it!
Sadly, though, there isn’t a lot of better cover art available out there.
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9873488
One idea I have that could be done is doing their own pornhub videos. Doing stuff to each other before telling their viewers that they can see them in real life at the Cherry Pit. Reality Kings did something similar where this guy is filming his girlfriend for a soap review and the take a shower together using it and fuck there.
9873682
I actually like the cover art tbh
9873865
Heh, that itself would actually be a fun thing to do.
But unless it’s commissioned, I’m unlikely to actually do anything of the sort. Sequels are usually less popular than their predecessors, so I could expect any sequel of this story to get even less attention, unfortunately.
9872883
Probably a combination of the cover art being fairly basic compared to some of the others (like "My Sister and I are Porn Stars"), and also being Equestria Girls, which for many is probably pony-not-pony. I mean, I come here for pony, so not-pony generally doesn't hold my attention. It's just not the same.
That said, this is really good. You got things rolling, kept them moving with enough detail, yet not so much as to get hung up - important as Twilight figured things out! - and flowed seamlessly into your usual... hotness. Yeah. That's about right.
I kinda' expected nothing less from you, which is why I was willing to go in on pony-not-pony.
It's interesting how this one is like the polar opposite of "My Sister and I are Porn Stars." Basic cover versus a super hot one, yet this story is the hot one because the broken-up nature of the other was kind of off-putting.
And this reminds me that I really want to read a story where a dazzling does it in her native form... Aria's got the best color scheme too. I'm weird, I know.
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Yeah ... that dazzling thing won’t be from me, probably! ^.^ Never much liked dragons, sirens, and the like.
Can you do one like this in a circle but this time getting Them pregnant
9886570
In a circle?
(And anyway, I mostly only take suggestions from my Patreon supporters.)
9886083
*Commissions a dragon x native dazzling story from you just to be contrary*
9887194
Well, if you want to spend money on a fic that will probably turn out inferior...
I’m just saying ... if I don’t find it sexy, it probably won’t end up very sexy in writing.
Though who knows ... maybe I’d be able to fake it pretty good.
Wouldn't people be able to smell that? And if your skirt's lifted, for example by an air vent, it'll be visible too.
9983176
Eh, maybe. But by smell they won’t know who it’s coming from, and such accidental upskirts are going to be pretty unlikely ... especially if she’s self-conscious about it and making sure nobody sees.
nice work on both chapters
10104009
Thanks! ^.^ What’s your favorite part?
10104369
with the way twilight sparkel made money at the end