*Rubs hands together excitedly*

Oh man, now that most of the initial setup is done, we can really start digging in. Can't wait to see what lies beneath the surface. You've put together quite the fascinating setting here.

Theory: Twilight finds a way to overthrow Celestia and becomes the new Ruler of the World with the help of the mysterious voice.

Why do I have the nagging feeling Rarity isn't going to survive this?

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You should be doubting the survival of most every character in this universe

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Well, good to see I'm on the right track. :D

Interesting story. I have a feeling Celestia is more bored than she let's on and plays with lives like her pony counterpart plays pranks. Out of boredom. And Twilight is her new mouse plaything. Like Rarity was before her. Or Celestia is looking for a mage to do something. Something important.

Also, poor Sweetie Belle. Someone needs restorative magic seems.

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I do like death

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Doubting their survival doesn't mean they'll die. Hope for the best, prepare for the worst.

Well I can honestly say after finally reading the chapter. Rarity needs to get laid

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Unless given explicit permission by the Empress, the Royal Chancellor is not allowed suitors or sex at all, unless it is with the intent of bearing a replacement Chancellor, which the Empress may or may not desire of her just yet. Part of being Chancellor is a vow of chastity.

Suffice it to say, Ms. Rarity is a bit pent up.

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That could be a fun chapter The Queen orders the two of them too fuck for her amusement

I forgot that the last three chapter had taken place over the course of about a single day.

Also, calling the voice in Twilight's head being Luna/Nightmare Moon.

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It was a very big day for Twilight. Things will be picking up soon

The bruise seemed to have darkened significantly, the formerly pale skin now a tepid purplish-blue on much of her palm.

Heh. That's certainly one way to work in a bit of EqG coloration.

The elites are called Daybreakers. That's definitely not a good sign. I get the feeling those masks aren't just for looking intimidating.

In any case, good to see Twilight has a few friends among the staff already. To say nothing of the one trying to get in touch through other means. "Friends in high places" doesn't usually mean lunar orbit, but it works. Let's just hope she cna live long enough to figure out what's going on.

I love how ya written Sweetie in this so far. She's is just the person to be a much needed companion for Twilight as a breather from all the harsh tones lashed out at poor Twilight.

" At the arena, her voice was so big and loud"

I am amazed at the wording of this (I'm going to hell)

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You don't read much, do you?