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Too bad for them that the person who has figured out the truth has so severely damaged their credibility at just the wrong time. That's what they get for such a disgusting display. And even worse, from the Empress' perspective, they claimed ownership of something that belongs to her. She's not going to take kindly to that.
Honestly, Celestia should have just ended Spearhead right then and there.
Woah. Heavy stuff. Now we're beginning to see the black and white rendered in grey, Celestia's inner kindness and Luna's inner rage peeking out. Still, I'm not sure why Luna didn't just go for the head last chapter. The only explanation I can come up with is that she wanted to make sure the kingdom didn't immediately descend into total chaos, and that they would accept Luna as the new ruler.
Anyway, I binged this a little while ago, after that blog post. Why the hiatus now, if this was to be your main focus? I don't mind, I'm just worried. Are you dealing with stuff IRL? Personal or epidemic-related?
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At that moment, the Empress was more concerned with getting Twilight to safety than anything else. She only stabbed him to make sure he didn't run off anywhere
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Luna only grazed tbe Empress because she wanted to see her face upon being hit. At least, that's what she would say. The truth is, that arrow wouldn't have killed the Empress anyway.
No disease could keep me from writing this story in particular. This "hiatus", a term I'm not fond of because it gives off the wrong vibes, is just because I haven't really released much else lately, and I worry my readers might be getting antsy. Don't worry, after a few more traditional LewdChapter Originals, this will be back like it never left.
Me: Wishes for a sex scene.
Monkey's Paw: Spearhead.
On a more serious note, I'm enjoying how the waters are getting muddied with both Celestia and Luna. I'm kind of doubtful about Luna's bombs not actually killing anyone since they're, y'know, bombs. Even if she never intended to hurt anyone, it's still dumping a bunch of easily spread and difficult to put out fire in a heavily populated city. And while Celestia is still someone who orders deaths on a whim, it's kind of nice to see her be tender with Twilight. Doesn't excuse anything, but at the same time it shows she's not evil all the time. Doesn't get up and put on her slippers evilly and all that.
Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!
Question Why in the nine hells is spear head that dumb
I love this so much! Every chapter is worth the wait. Now if only I could get a new chapter of Fallout Equestria: Infinite Potential.
Inb4 a whole chapter dedicated to torture.
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A whole chapter dedicated to torture seems a bit excessive. What kind of writer would spend multiple thousands of words exclusively depicting a scene of gratuitous gore and violence?
Oh, yeah, I see your point. Fair enough.
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I never said it was a bad thing
Oh, Spearhead... you dun fucked up.
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Probably the simplest, and most accurate, comment on this chapter so far
Ok. First of all, there are only two ways this story can end.
1: Twilight redeems both of them.
2: Twilight defeats both of them.
But mostly I'm just sad. Cause HIATUS
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There's definitely more ways that this story can end than those two, and that end is not going to be for a very long time.
Don't worry about the hiatus. It won't be long.
Twilight's loyalties are going to become less clear after this, perhaps not undeservedly. Also, that was a very stupid thing of spearhead to do, then again anyone who's willing to do that to another person, probably isn't the sharpest knife in the draw to begin with. However, if Celestia knows about Twilight's talks with Luna, something tells me she may have manipulated the entire thing. But that's a big if. I guess we'll see. Anyway, good chapter. Nice to see you during this difficult time. Hope your staying inside and are staying healthy.
Odds of Celestia killing Spearhead VS. letting him live but chopping his dick and balls off?
Honestly I think at this point both Luna and Celestia need to be replaced. One is needlessly cruel while the other I think only thinks of her vengeance. And probably would be just as bad as Celestia if she took power
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I mean...it IS in his name...Dick Head.
And nice to see that my suspicions of Regicide on the part of Celestia are somewhat confirmed. Not sure if Luna's actions dismay me or not, given just how egotistical and tyrannical Celestia has proven to be. About the only justification I could see is that Celestia was trying to save the empire from some outside force, like dragons/griffins/Empire, but given that there has been no mention of such a thing it'd come off as an asspull now.
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It's not unreasonable to assume they either don't care or are to scared of celestia to do anything
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There are only 3 hells, silly
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I'm doing good. Glad you're enjoying. Wash ya hands
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Is there such a thing as a good King or Queen?
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Yes, yes there is. A brief look at history will show dozens of Monarchs that ruled their kingdoms with honour, kindness and wisdom. Being a King doesn't make someone good or bad, how they use the powers associated with being King/Queen is what will define them in history.
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That was more so my attempts at staying within canon and making a somewhat dark "joke" than an actual assertion to the morality of real life rulers.
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Power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutely. Almost think that's the moral of this story.
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It's one of the themes
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Oh, sorry. Look like I missed that joke. But now that I get it, it's funny. :D
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Don't worry, I'm not that funny anyway
Oh, Spearhead. How could you be so recocking stupid?!
Good chapter. i hope Spearhead's death is long and drawn out and he's begging by the end.
That chapter was intense. And I'm much more interested in Celestia now. There might just be something that's not totally evil underneath all that.
On an much less important note, it's been a very long time since I've taken any latin, but I'm almost certain "Ingis Minora" is not correct. Ignis is masculine, and the "-a" suffix of minor is only used for neuter plural nouns. My best guess for the correct translation is "Ignis Minor" for singular or "Ignes Minores" for plural. On the other hand, none of this matters and "Ignis Minora" sounds better and more like a magic spell. I've also been reading this story since chapter 1 and didn't notice until just now.
On the other other hand, changing it will stop pedants like me from leaving comments like this.
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Luckily for me, sorcery in this universe isn't Latin. It's sorcery.
The actual words are irrelevant. They are based off of various words that sound sufficiently magickal and that I have changed and generally bullshitted my way into having mystical words of power. Some of it is bullshit Latin. Some of it is bullshit Spanish. None of it matters, because the words are not what are important. It's the result of the sorcery that matters.
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Of course. It's so obvious, should have realized that myself. 10/10 explanation.
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I can't tell if you're being cheeky or not, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt
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No sarcasm. Genuinely like the explanation.
Well damn, I legit teared up reading the aftermath of that infamous scene with Spearhead. It's was a toughie reading that scene and gawd was it so cathartic seeing the girl finally saved by Celestia, of all people.
But alas, Twilight's life has unfortunately been changed forever, scarred by the monster who's now the only person who knows that she's on the verge of betraying the Empress...oh is she?
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liar, you're very funny