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PonyvilleDJ


Just another disk jockey from Ponyville.

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Scootaloo has a secret, and she's not telling anypony; not even her best friends. But as suspicion arises over the days following their last cutie mark attempt, Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle make it their business to figure out what's going on.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 97 )

:fluttercry::fluttercry: i like it.... but.... Q___Q

faved and tracked hun, i can't wait until the next chapter, but take your time with it, and don't rush otherwise it will come out poorly

This is a really lovely start- I'd like to see where it's going!

:pinkiehappy:

This will be interesting

Apple Bloom is two words.

1086254 I think it's more of a preference. I myself prefer, "Applebloom," without a space. It's just a matter of opinion. Some people do it with a space, and some do it without a space. :twilightsmile:

So either her family is not around or her family are the worst?

1122841 or she's can't fly or she's a pessimist

its sad to see when offered so much she refuses and chooses to live with so little:fluttercry:

fabianguzman18>>1138246
That's pride talking. I don't need help! I can do it myself!

1138536 but is pride worth starving and never asking for help?

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You would be surprised...

2 things
1) uhhhh where'd Luna come from?
2) Could grease from 1 dinners worth of cooking really be enough to cause a huge house fire? I mean, other than that I feel you could tidy up the back story a bit, I mean "First there was a fire, when a griffon saved me and told no one. Then, she got into a fight with a dragon"
Just seems kinda far-fetched.

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1) She was raising the moon and saw one of her younger subjects out and about, looking very out of place. She said herself that it's her duty to help her subjects.
2) It specifically said that multiple recipes were tested. It wasn't just a single dinner.

Everything else will be explained in more detail as it unfolds.

Weird ending and also first

:fluttershyouch::says all we need is a little kindness also what of luna's offer

...Hi Ditzy/Derpy/Bright Eyes!!!

1123005 & 1124121
Stop being d[YOUNG LADIES DO NOT USE VULGAR LANGUAGE]s to :scootangel:!

Pins and microprocessors.
I want to hug you, more than half the people I know have no idea how computers work.
Besides that point I'm enjoying your story, I look forward to more.

“Ah would let you either,” Apple Bloom said chidingly.

*Wouldn't

Also, this is fucking awesome and we require moar pony.

close call scootaloo

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Thanks. I thought I had hammered out all of the typos, but I guess not. Fixing it now.

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No worries, you write something awesome, I help you fix in gratitude

I am SOOOOO sorry to make this update take so long. I had some problems with my band and fell into a depression, compounded by weeks of ensuing alcohol abuse. But now that the premier of Season 3 has given me a swift kick in the tuckas, I can give this story a similar treatment. I only hope that I can maintain my sobriety ong enough to bring this story closure.

Please enjoy and leave your comments down here.

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-huggles- well i'm glad you are feeling better hun, if you ever want to talk about things that are depressing you send me a PM and i'll be more than willing to listen :twilightsmile:

:flutterrage: moar, it may be a short story so far but I enjoy it.

This shit, i like it.

Sorry this update is taking so long. My computer took a massive deuce on me. I've since got a new computer, but I'm working on getting things recovered from my old hard drive. I'll try to have something out by New Years.

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Interesting start, although one canon nitpick: Sweetie Belle doesn't live at Carousel Boutique :)

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...Oops. You're right. I looked it up and you are right.
CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS STORY REVISERS! YAY!

CUTIEMARK CRUSADERS HUNGOVER DJ TORMENTORS YAYYYYYYY!!!!

Actually for the most part she does... true she has parents but it's not like we have seen her house. Anyway PLEASE Continue it :) 1881566

Well, finally getting to comment on this. I read up to all current chapters and I'm ready to state my opinion to you.



I like it.
:twilightsmile:
sad and funny when appropriate, and you do your own fill in the blank for canon when you need it. So kudos.
Keep going madam.

What happened to the story scootaloo's tormentor . Its gone now... Not from this storyline but from fimfiction.... Who should i ask about this?

She has a penis.

>...that was her home.

Comment posted by Sunny Smile deleted Sep 7th, 2013

“Well, the first thing you gotta know is to never start your day on an empty stomach! Who’s up for some breakfast?”

They all cheered some more before Octavia brought Vinyl up to speed.

“Vinyl,” she said. “It’s nearly lunch time.”

“Who’s up for some lunch?” the DJ revised.

Again, the Crusaders all cheered and followed her to the kitchen

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::moustache:

Several irate ponies came homemade alcohol

Something about that line feels off.

3168469 *pulls glasses down* dear celestia....

So Luna's into comics now?

Somepony is going to find that book and Scootaloo's worlds will collide

1086254 1092423 "Apple Bloom" is how it appears in the credits. I used to spell it as one word but I decided to change after seeing it.

Now that was new, never seen Scootaloo find out about her parents that way before heh. MOAR! :flutterrage:

Sooo... with Scoots new 30 lives, will she be able to beat Contra?

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