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Thank you for doing that, but I have since rectified the lack of image source.
Dark, wrong, and hot as hell. Stuffing this one in my favorites.
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Thank you.
I'm glad you liked it.
When you say "species appropriate phallus" in relation to a griffon, I pay attention; I keep having to remind people that all the bird bits go in the front, and most birds don't have external phalli.
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I have the same question but from a different direction. A Griffon has Lion back end and so should have a cat penis. I would think that a spined cat penis would be ideal for non-consent sex.
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Yeah, cats are assholes like that.
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Although if I had full creative control, I very likely would not have gone with the cat phallus because simply put, it's not hot 
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The requester actually presented a few pictures and specified a cock with the exact shape and gonads as presented in the fic.
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Then what must, must be.
I do disagree with big cats not being hot. Their natural style is forced and frequent. That gives gives you many chances for things like "where are you going, slut, we're nowhere near done."
This was very well done here, and I would say realistic is the word to best describe it. It was believable through and through, and despite most people liking happy endings, this kept up the realism over pleasing the majority. Myself included in that majority, yet the dedication to remaining true to that realistic feel was commendable. The character development in such a short time was also excellent, and pulling that off is annoyingly difficult.
Overall, bravo my good lad, bravo.
On a sidenote: (Obligatory I do not endorse or support rape) As much as people dislike the subject here, I've never really seen why it has been chosen as the supposed pinical of atrocities to ever be enacted. There are far worse things a human (Or in this case, a pony or griffon) can do to their kinsfolk. Far worse things...
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No but it's the one that probably hits closest to home.
Considering rape is the crime of having sex with someone without their permission, one could say it's too easy to commit.
That and a whole bunch of other crimes are associated with.
And then she goes on a griffon killing spree, making sure to always kill at least two birds with one stone.
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) And I somewhat agree with your closing remarks. There are arguably much worse things than rape. Murder, torture, skinning alive. It's still a bad thing nonetheless, as is any harmful act against another human being.
I'm glad you liked it. Personally, I've never been a fan of when rape ends in a happy ending, especially when its the brutal, non-eventual-consensual type of rape. It never really makes sense. However the requester is somewhat to thank for that. They specifically desired a scenario in which the victim would not grow to enjoy or like the act whatsoever. The early section is something I was particularly proud of, characterizing and describing Auriga and Harpy. I made a lot of tweaks to that early section to get across their characters whilst also being succinct in description. I did lend Auriga a tad more focus since, I presume the audience for this fic is straight and would like her described more (although I did spend more than was necessary on Harpy's genitals for the so-inclined.
Considering all of that 'digress', I appreciate that you liked my fic. It means a lot to me.
Never know if a griffon is lurking about. Unrelated: Don't look behind you. 
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You better look over your shoulder when walking tight alleys for a while now
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Who gave you the B-word pass?
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Hmm... I have a theory. Its ill thought out considering I'd rather not dwell to long on such deviants lest I punch a wall, but I do have one: I think its because it reduces a person as a thing to be used and discarded. Mind you the current culture seems to propose such a thing as the ideal, but that's another topic.
Its a matter of respect, I suppose. I mean, you have to really put in the effort and time to skin someone alive or draw and quarter them. Going from such peoples perspective, torturing a human is much more fun then a cat of pigeon, a feather in their cap whereas an animal was just practice from the big leagues. But here, well, he could have just as easily gotten the same result from a pillow or his own claws.
Of course I could be wrong, but again, I'd rather not dwell on it, and more to the point, haven't actually read this, nor intend too.
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It encapsulates that which most women fear being reduced to the most: an object. And I get that reasoning. (Although men can be raped too, do not forget.) People don't like being dehumanized, and it is often if not always life-ruining. However the approach to this issue is utilitarian. Which would cause the person more suffering? Being raped, or being tortured painfully without end. Both cause mental and physical trauma, and rape can be bundled into torture too, but when you reduce it to just levels, people argue that rape is less severe than torture or my example (Skinning) because the levels of pain the person experiences would often be of a greater level than the pain experienced from a rape - of course, that being said, rape isn't a singular general descriptor. You could be forcibly penetrated with a knife into various orifices and still experience excruciating pain. But if you were to compare long-lasting and painful torture to the rape experienced by Auriga in this story, then people would argue that rape is not the pinnacle of human suffering. I would personally choose to be raped over seeing a member of my family be killed for instance.
All of that being said, I am curious why you clicked on this story if you didn't intend to read it. If it was just to leave a down vote, fair dues. I don't hold it against you. But me thinks someone has a kink they're ashamed of and wants to safe face.
Although I kid, of course. (Forgot to add this when I typed that. )
@ https://www.fimfiction.net/user/265812/Jackelope
I think the special quality of rape is that your pain is my pleasure taken to its most intense level. The more you hurt, the bigger my orgasm. That's the raw power element for any character.
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Yeah, but its funny when we suffer.
Because I always get a laugh from the comments section
But I don't down vote, even when its something I don't particularly care for. What ho, someone who feels people can have other opinions and enjoy things they don't so long as they don't act on them is online? SOMEONE STIFLE THIS RADICAL SUBVERSIVE BEFORE HE BREAKS WIND IN FRONT OF QUEEN CLINTON
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I understand that sentiment. It therefore falls into the same vein as sadism then, doesn't it? Although sprinkled with domination and power play. Personally I wasn't aroused whilst writing this. I don't really get my jollies from the fetish like some others do. And each time I've written rape, it has always been at someone's behest rather than my own. But I get it somewhat through proxy, since I do have something of a liking for domination, which is an aspect of it as I previously stated.
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Well I'm thankful you didn't click just to dislike, I appreciate that. And I agree, the comments on fics such as these tend to number higher than on my other fics. People either want to publicly justify their fetish, or condemn those who do like this kink. Machinations of a somnophile in particular attracted a great gathering of ire. A brother's curiosity also caused considerable debate over the subject matter. I've grown to expect it. And concerning your comment about how it's funny when it happens to men, I am curious how my next commission will be received...
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I'm not big on the sadism element either but among many species, particularly equine, it is normal for the female to force the male to earn his rights. There's a line between that and rape but sometimes the fun is in finding it.
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Glad to have been a review and comment you enjoyed. I meant everything I said, it definitely is in the high-tier of its kind that I've read, and due to a very specific friend I have, I've read a lot of these. (Not by the friend forcing me, it's my way of attempting to be his friend)
And having warched Game of Thrones, yes, skinning is an... Unpleasant experience to watch, let alone endure.
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Or lets just split the mickey and cover all the sadistic bases: the Vlad Tepis Special
History is weird folks: we see him as a monster in history, but apparently in his home country, he's a hero
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While I agree with you on both the home hitting and the relative ease with which this crime can be committed, I disagree on attaching other crimes to it making it deserve such a reputation. To me, that's akin to guilt-by-association, which is hardly a fair practice in my opinion. My point was that the act itself has a very dark reputation, which when compared to other criminal acts, seems unjustly earned. In a toe to toe match, rape vs something like burning alive, flaying alive, or an iron maiden makes it seem rather insignificant, does it not?
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You may be on to something there. To dehumanize a person is a terrible fate for the receiver of that, as it then gives justification for anything to be done to them without guilty, pity, or mercy. Some of the greatest armies in history were so great because they viewed those against them as inhuman. The ability to think a living human, a racial brother or sister, as not that, is a mighty gift, but can become a terrible curse if uncontrolled.
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Same goes for Genghis Khan. To outsiders they were seen as cruel, sadistic individuals. In their home countries, they're seen as heroes who either defended their state (in the example of Vlad) or great conquerors who kept their civilization alive (Ghengis.) The other tribal peoples of Northern China were either assimilated by the Machu or reduced to a very insignificant minority. Mongols? Still around. They obviously did something right despite the cruelty.
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I think it goes a bit deeper then that. I mean, a man can see another as a dog, but a person can still respect them. Rape is the penultimate disregard of another as even being worthy of notice of their objection. As noted, a thing to be used and discarded.
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A matter of perspective. And Genghis and Tepis were certainly better then their enemies, if nothing else
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Well, you are correct, but you misinterpreted my definition of dehumanization. Animals can gain the respect of humans, like my cat did for me, God rest his fluffy soul.
No, to dehumanize someone in the way I was speaking, was to make them lesser than the dirt beneath the instigator's boots. To view them as not just nothing, but less than nothing, a waste a human life and an unjust thief of oxygen. That is true dehumanization.
Also, I think over 9 million Persians (Native to the Khwarazmian Empire) would disagree on Genghis Khan being better than who he was fighting.
Not only that, but I also don't particularly like that series you referred to either. (I fear no fan boys 
)
To be honest, Auriga sort of deserved what she got. Harpy did nothing wrong to her, and was nice and friendly to her, and in return she treated him like shit, and even threw her drink on him (with could be classed as a form of assault), and all because he was a griffon, and is a malicious racist bitch.
There's absolutely no justifications for raping someone, but I felt no sympathy for her after her horrid behavior towards him.
Wasn't
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Then
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Miss a quotation
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Bad move...
. VERY bad move
!!!
You should've just apologized, and he would've let you go
. That was all he wanted, an apology...is your pride that strong
?!
Well, until somepony pissed you off for no reason, especially when drunk
!!!
Oh, I think she'll take that to heart very well
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Make them horse bucks, my dude. Pursue your passion. Even if it means writing kinky horse sax.
Well, it's not like there's nothing much worse out there.
And believe me, the things I've read...
nice
This is my fetish
Congratulations on the decisively earned Feature. It's not easy to get stuff like this on that board, but you accomplished just that. Job well done.
"Wow this mare's hatred of griffons is totally unjustified, better go rape her."
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My recommendation is to not go into an establishment such as this and broadcast your hatred of its patrons without worrying about such repercussions happening. I won't say she got what she deserved (because absolutely no one deserves being raped! Not now, not ever!), but shit happens, and well... she was the one to get shit on this time.
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Just, no. She deserved to be raped because she was rude and threw a drink at someone? That's the most fucked up thing I've read, and I just finished reading this thing.
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Same reason people have problems with supreme beings who know better than you do, or righteous (not secretly evil-must be removed) authority figures.
Anything that makes you, as a human, feel less powerful, important, and special is something that's almost scarring. The social mind has a way of violently rejecting these notions even if intellectually you can agree with them - there's a detachment that prevents you from experiencing that acceptance in most cases. When one does, there tends to either be an extreme depression that follows - or is the cause of the realization.
So I could see how rape would fall under that banner. We have a sort of self-perpetuating arrogance, that if shattered, can cause neurochemical backlash. Being dehumanized sexually (in a way that was not agreed upon beforehand) can certainly lead to this situation, and likely we inherently fear it.
That said, people should remember that we're here for the fantasy. Not to discuss or hate upon the reality of the thing. Fantasy and real life are meant to be completely separate. If we cannot do that through stories which is acceptable behind closed doors (and consent) anyway, then there is something wrong with the accusers - folks who will likely show up in these comments within the next day or so trying to decry the topic even as fantasy as some sort of 'harmful thinking'.
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Your spitting mad facts right now
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(Also thanks for the fave
)
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You are completely right. I appreciate long comments such as these, thank you.
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This is an extremely spicy take.
However, personally, I disagree. To say she was sort've deserving would imply she got a just punishment for the crime. Now, personally, I don't think being very unsociable and racist is deserving of rape as a punishment. However, I do understand your angle that she isn't deserving sympathy. She wasn't very nice, hostile, and unnecessarily threw wine over him. A just punishment for that would be, I dunno, a tar and feathering (cause it'd be poetic since she'd be feathered like a griffon.) And, if you ask me, if you rape someone, the punishment should be a rape from the victim. Tis only fair.
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Glad you like it. Comments like this never fail to make me smile.
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D-don't say it!
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This is part of what I was getting at. People died from being tarred and feathered... pretty much most every time. We would rather someone be murdered for the things they commit than raped. Which points back to my earlier statement and the mentality we have towards having our secret fear of being worth less than other humans exposed by being forced to feel as though one is worth less. Part of it also is just all the unnecessary baggage we have tied up in sexuality to begin with. It's more permissible to show death, hatred, bigotry, and gore to our population young and old than it is love, nudity, and nonstandard relationships. Which says a lot about how we view sex, sexuality, and unlawful carnal acts.
As a society we are more comfortable with someone being brutally tortured and killed than being sexually dehumanized and then set off to hopefully begin their healing. What this says about us I could speak volumes on, but it's not what we're here for!
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Need I remind that this is a rape fantasy story. If that's how he feels about it or chooses to enjoy it, then for his take on the fantasy it is completely acceptable. For yours, maybe you view her as some helpless damsel and the griffon as some vile, contemptible justification for all her racist violence. Either way, everyone will choose to view and/or enjoy it differently, as is completely their right. Someone may enjoy thinking about themselves in her position, or themselves in his position, or as a bystander, or some Dudley Do-Right who would save her from the mean catbird if given a chance, or the next Dick Dastardly in line waiting for a turn.
Let us all simply enjoy what parts of this we enjoy.
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Something tells me Harpy wouldn't survive that particular encounter.
I love stories about xenophobes being raped by what they hate.
especially when what they hate is griffons
okay I just love stories about anyone being raped by griffons
Congratz, you got featured again. 8/9/2019
Not going to read it, not my thing. But did want to at least speak up and thank you for drawing the bright line between the fantasy and the reality, and saying that the reality is not okay.
If people want to enjoy the fantasy, that's their own business, so long as nobody is getting hurt.
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ah ha haaaaaa not really.
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At least you're honest. 
People read what they want to read. And my disclaimer was both my own opinion and something I'm obliged to do. Even though it should be blatant, just because I wrote this work does not mean I endorse what occurs within, obviously. But it's fiction, and if video games have taught me anything, just because you enjoy something in the unreal, does not mean you enjoy or will commit it in the real.
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Thanks! I did not expect this fic to get featured. Although, it is something of a mixed-blessing. People who vehemently oppose this type of thing will dislike the work without reading it, which begs the question of why they even clicked to begin with. Although I expect that, considering my words in the description. Nevertheless, thank you for the congratulations. I'm happy it got featured, lingering minus aside.
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No problem
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Edit: Apologies. Did not realize the comment was not directed at me. Disregard.
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You have a very colorful vocabulary.
I like you.
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I think you misunderstand me. I said that there's absolutely no justifications for raping someone, which means rape isn't justice. Did you not read that part?
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That's sort of what my comment was trying to say. And I did say that rape is never justice, though when I said "she deserved it", it can imply to something to happen to her. I wasn't try to sound like rape is right or anything like that.