Sunset and Adagio have been dating for a while. But, a dark cloud looms over their relationship.
Adagio is slowly dying.
To make their last days together memorable ones, Sunset and Adagio go to the beach.
"Sex", "Gore", and "Profanity" tags are there just to play it safe.
This was written as one of three potential submissions for Oroboro's Sunset Shipping Contest.
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Alright, newish author but an interesting subject matter. I'll bite.
This is so sweet but the ending...
Still very cute tho <3
Damn, ya hate to see it. Heartwarming though, and bittersweet. Loved it.
Oh Sunset. You beautiful, self-sacrificing pony.
That was beautifully bittersweet. Well done.
Oh my gosh. So emotion!!
You wrote a great story and deserved my instant upvote and favorite.
I like it. Especially that ending. Hit right in the liver. Have a fav. Is this story in the contest?
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It's one of three that I wrote. Still trying to figure out which one will be officially submitted (provided I don't find myself writing more).
Either way, the reader wins.
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Well, if you ask me, pick this one.
It was Sunset whimpering that made me realize she was going to be a bit OOC in this... I guess it could make sense given the circumstances, although I can't tell how old either of them are in this, or how much time has passed.
The premise is cute, and some fluff is nice, even if bittersweet.
Bittersweet, but also adorable.
You've got "Sunset motioned her girlfriend" in like, the sixth line, and I just hate seeing typos that close to the start. D:
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I tried XD. Even took a page from your book and listened to it while editing.
I was kind of hoping for the ending Adagio wanted, so I'm a tad disappointed, but overall I liked this quite a bit.
и нежно и больно одновременно ...
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