After Twilight was falsely committed for a crime she did not commit, she was banished from Equestria for eternity and left her friends, family, and Mentor behind to grief. She has only a few days before the trial and in this little time she had left, she found some secrets that would almost forget her existence and those that warmed her heart.
Hello, every creature! Hope you all enjoy this story. This story was actually at one of the drafts and then an urge of inspiration hit me! I ended up making the first chapter short. Sorry.
Disclaimer: And there will be some parts of this story that was inspired by the TiM Series by TwidashForever
Chapters (8)
Looking good so far, haven't really found any spelling mistakes, just words missing once or twice. You most likely just need to proofread the future chapters just in case. Otherwise, I already have a theory. I think it's chrysalis, she's shown she can turn into alicorns, has been shown to have some powerful magic, and has a motive. Good story so far
Why did you put this on hiatus after only one chapter?
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The urge of inspiration hit me again... That ended me hitting hiatus because of the next chapter, sorry if you were expecting more chapters
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Thank you for the advice Star-Struck! I was really in the urge of writing...
Oh and your theory, you'll find out as the chapter progresses
I like where this is going
Happens to the best of us. Don't worry, you'll be making stellars soon.
Banished from Equestria story with no trial and flimsy to no evidence? One of the weakest least interesting motivations to push the protagonist out of their comfort zone.
I got the “indisputable evidence” right here!
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I WANT TO TELL YOU SO BAD ABOUT WHAT YOU JUST COMMENTED BUT I CANT BECAUSE ILL BE GIVING OIT SPOILERSSSSSSSSSS
Celestia help me....
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Great story so far and can’t wait to read more!
There's so much goin' on that I don't know what to expect in later chapters, and it's driving me crazy!
I smell TwiDash
Am I in the right place?
Is that Nightfall Glint girl the reason Twilight's being banished?
So Twilight is Sombra's Daughter?
That does not surprise me.....
how much you wanna bet it was a changeling?
What the hay, I haven't kept up with this story since Day 1. I need to keep track of this...
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I GOT MONEY ON STARLIGHT HATE THAT UPPITY BITCH
I am completely lost
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oof-.. lucky u then
After almost 6 months people would loose the idea of what the story is even about.
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i know right? me 2
What made you cancel this?
Bitbitbitbitbitbitchhhhhhhhhhhh