Snu-Snu version is the best version

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Even when there's not actually any snu snu?

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Your THAT skilled it seems

Well this was a first never read a levee bj I ever seen in anything lol

Also you are just that skilled in your writing

a grate chapter. this version is just a little bit better.

She kept working my shaft until I relaxed. When I did, she released me and. Crawled up my body and laid on my chest, care to avoid my chest spike.

"That good, huh?" She said, snarkily.

There shouldn't be a period between "and" and "Crawled" (and, naturally, "crawled" shouldn't be capitalized).

Also, the "She" after the question mark shouldn't be capitalized (ending dialogue with a question mark or exclamation point follows the same rules as a period in terms of capitalization; you're generally not supposed to do it). There are probably other places where this would need to be fixed, but I just noticed the one at the end.

Great chapter though! I was very disappointed when I caught up to this and Equestian Eeveelution the other day, so I'm grateful to get a new chapter so quickly! (Though I have a sneaking suspicion I shouldn't be expecting a new chapter every week. Call it a hunch. )

Kinda sad Leo didnt take it like a champ & Luke giving Leo the same treatment... But maybe another time...

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Let's see you take something the size of your forearm 'like a champ'

10084497 At that point it'd be more like, "Oh Arceus I'm gonn a be sore for a month!" for Leo.

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More like sore for the rest of her life, which wouldn't be very long after something tears and she bleeds to death.

And, yes, that's possible. There's a reason it takes hours for a woman's body to get ready for childbirth.

This was a awesomely sweet and chill chapter,

Friendship is magic especially with benefits
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