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Zubric
Love to write whatever comes to mind and enjoy Brony stuff.
Zubric
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Revenge is served cold, Twilight can very well replicate the spell
"mischievous nne e day and uses" Wut.
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Just something I missed in proofreading I’ll go fix it. how embarrassing
Well, now I know where Sebastian Blackcat's spellbook landed.
“Sh-she is So counting groans of sands without magic!” S
“Sh-she is So counting grains of sands without magic!” S
First, THANK YOU for not including sex in this, it's gotten BANAL how every TF and MC story here has to include sex, I come for the TF and MC, not sex.
Also, my favorite parts had to be the 'I'm a good toy' parts, and I thought that those would have made Twilight's time a lot more tolerable, if she was a good toy and being used, then the weekend would flash by.
Reminds me of
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probably would have been better if i gave it a better proofread.. to be fair i wrote this is several small sessions os i kind of forgot about the "I'm a good toy" part. otherwise probably would have added more mind alterations.
This needs an sequel
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This needs a dark tag.
Nice line of Trixie calling Starlight a sycophant.
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I don't think so. Since Twilight WAS getting turned back to normal on Monday.
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Right, getting utterly immobilized against one's will and forcibly transformed and used for the cruel amusement of others is fine and totally PG provided there is a time limit. *Rolls eyes*
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Yes.
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>Its fine if its an utterly torturous thing to do someone, cus your only torturing and humiliating them for a couple days.
Jesus man, are you a sociopath or what?
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You'd be surprised what you can do with a PG rating as long as you avoid the sex and the gore. And Twilight will be thinking happy toy thoughts soon enough and enjoy the weekend.
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>its fine if we torture her for a while, eventually her mind will break utterly and that's enough to avoid the dark tag.
Wut.
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And it's not dark to have heavy objects that would kill you if dropped on you fall on you? Broke neck. Shattered ones. All those things?
Nice job!
I liked the part where Starlight and Trixie were messing around with their new toy, throwing those other spells into the mix was creative.
Cute and funny! I imagine Starlight is really going to regret this!
Nice story though there are a few grammatical errors and misspellings.
If you'd like I can edit this one as well
I love this
...
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To each their own. Personally I find that TF without sex is like chocolate cake without the chocolate. You can do that, but... it robs it of it's essence.
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I find it just the opposite.
Personally I’m not a fan of these types of stories. Where the characters involved have to act so OOC that they have little resemblance to the original and then commit highly deplorable actions to their so called friends.
Starlight comes of a such a huge asshole, with very little in the way of actual likeable actions. She literally violates Twilights body against her will, not only that but forcing her to stay in her form for several days. I wouldn’t be surprised if Twilight would need therapy at the end of it. The whole idea of being conscious whilst you can’t move or speak is utterly terrifiying. Reminds me of ‘I have no mouth and I must scream’.
Dang I really wants to know what happens after starlightt turns her back
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I keep thinning it over in my head really. Idk is turning Starlifht into a sex doll and sending her to sunburst for a while too much xD
this is SO good.
My only complaint (beyond grammar) is not going into enough detail on some of the later transformations!
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How about turning her into random objects like a ball to be kick around, a plunger to unclog a toilet, a toothbrush to clean someone dirty mouth and more.
If Celestia can turn Twilight in into a pacifier, Luna into a diaper, and Spike into a stuff toy. Than the possibilities are endless.
After the events of the sequel with Celestia. Twilight takes the book Celestia had, (that or make a copy of the spell, Luna still needs it to inact her vengeance) and use it to turn Starlight into random everyday objects and have her be used by others.
For a whole week or just for the equal amount of time she left Twilight as a balloon. Starlight will be turned into something new every few hours or so and is teleported to a new location where someone will have use of that object.
It could all end with her being turned into a toilet in a public restroom, and just to be nice, Twilight puts her in the mares room only.
After going through all that Starlight will learn to never pull a stunt like that on Twilight again, unless she's prepared to face the consequences.
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If it ok with you! Can I write the sequel. It will be awhile before I start it but that only gives me plenty of time to think on how the story would go.
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To be honest, you’ve got me rather interested. I wasn’t too sure when I’d actually write the twilight comeback but I’ll be a trip to see whatever you write.
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Then we're agreed. It will probably be awhile before I write mine. Still got other stories to work on, but it will come.