I write well when I am brave enough to speak my mind. Soy milk fund
Starlight likes Sunburst. Sunburst likes Trixie. Trixie likes Starlight. Hilarity ensues. 'Nuff said.
A/N: This is PURE crack shipping, intended for comedic purposes. Please don’t take seriously. TBH, I literally wrote the first chapter in no more than 2 hours on an impluse. 
Contains SPOILERS for Season 9 episode 20 (A Horse-Shoe In). You have been warned.
This is a multiple POV story.
Inspired by this fanfic over on FFN: [...]/s/9799512/1/Serious-Love-Triangle
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2 hours of time and you can't even break 2k? Weakling!
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Also when I rush things they tend to turn out like crap.
Yes, I'm guilty, I am unfortunately a very slow writer.
9758576 I'm the complete opposite then. I need to mash out the whole thing/chapter/story out in one go and publish it, or I'll start to doubt the quality and enter an endless cycle of re-writes and hesitations until I hate all of it. I mean, I proofread once but that's it.
To each their own, right?
This has potential.
Oh god, these idiots.
Is vice headmare the right term if Sunburst is a guy?
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Ah yes, the joys of fan fiction: where everypony, big or small, underage or overage, male or female or neither are all horny as horses.
About the "headmare" thing. Yes, that's what I thought, but in the episode Big Mac was a candidate for "vice headmare," and Sunburst was called "vice headmare."
I guess you could say that there's a double standard: if you call a female filmer a "cameraman," most people won't bat an eye. Call a male police a "policewoman" and everyone will think you're strange.
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That's a good point.
I wanna see how this goes
Really? I thought the Trixie/Starlight and Starlight/Sunburst pairings were very common.
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Yes I suppose. The only reason why I said that was because I didn't want people to say that they're being OOC, or that the shipping isn't feasible. Really, I just arranged the pairings so that there'd be a nice and neat love triangle.
I enjoyed the different povs, the clarity of who is who, and how you depict the different characters' personalities. I enjoyed the humor.
Probably my least favorite thing was the double entendre at the very beginning, for the first ten (very short) paragraphs or so of Starlight Glimmer's first section. But when she recognized she was engaged in double entendre, I liked it better.
(Comment is on chapter one...and then I run out of time and run away!)
I got good laugh from this fic :D