BEHOLD! CHAPTER 2!

You mad man take a break!

I'VE GONE BEYOND MY LIMITS! PLUS ULTRA!!!!!!!

I know you were probably in a rush to finish, but at the start of the chapter is the "aunt" it mentions Cadence?

To say it was a momentous occasion in the Sparkle household would be a massive understatement at this point in time. As everyone including Twilight's mother was taking their chance to congratulate Twilight and Sunset on finally getting together after everyone had been waiting so long. As of right now the youngest Sparkle found herself in the full on loving death grip of her aunt who was more than just a little happy her niece had found her true love.

"Ohmygod, Ohmygod, Ohmygod, OH.MY.GOD!!!!" Cadence squeed with absolutely glee as she power hugged Twilight into her bosom. "MY LITTLE LADYBUGS FIRST TRUE LOVE! AND I CALLED IT RIGHT!! YES YES YES YES YES YES YES!!!"

Because if Cadence married Twilight's brother then that would make Cadence her sister in-law wouldn't it?

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Well yeah but Twilight in my canon usually just refers to Cadence as Auntie just to make it easier on herself and me when writing it but you make a good point though lol

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Oh thanks for the clarification and sorry for the bothersome question. I think this is my first time reading one of your stories so that is why I was questioning it. But anyway, I think that this a great story and I loved the part with Fluttershy and Rainbowdash.

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Hahha its totally okay I like it when people point out stuff like that because I don't always catch those things when I am editing and fixing mistakes and such. Also yeah the part with Rainbow and Fluttershy kinda just...popped into my head lol. Rainbow is basically their worlds version of the Flash so that was bound to happen.

"But seriously grand-kids girls. Think about it"

Careful or they'll make a robot daughter during a drunken science binge

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I know that reference :)

"Ohmygod, Ohmygod, Ohmygod, OH.MY.GOD!!!!" Cadence squeed with absolutely glee as she power hugged Twilight into her bosom. "MY LITTLE LADYBUGS FIRST TRUE LOVE! AND I CALLED IT RIGHT!! YES YES YES YES YES YES YES!!!"

Sounds like a crossover between MLP and Miraculous Ladybug lmao

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Hahaha I was thinking about doing that too that's the funny part

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Cadence is obviously the happiest next to pinkie and Rarity that they got together lol

Hmmm, it appears that I have developed adorkabetes. Oh dear.

That was just so unabashedly, overwhelmingly and unapologetically cute and adorable and sweet and… gah!

Honestly, while I like slow burn SunLight stories were we get to see the relationship develop over time, I also love ones where its established that they're already really into each other, and we just jump right to the two of them being snuggly and cute. It's like jawbreakers vs. milkshakes. One you savor over time, one you enjoy all at once, but both are really sweet and tasty.

"Oh its nothing much. Just the world is a lot brighter-" Sunset smiled and turned to Twilight and brought her close and their foreheads touched. "When there's sunlight in it."

This was the moment I really lost it. This one line, right here, was just so perfect and heartfelt. Sunset's not being aggressively flirty, or teasing, or anything. Just giving the girl she loves an honest, genuine and gentle confession. That being with Twilight makes her world so much brighter.

As an aside, the mid-episode FlutterDash was cute as heck too. Flutters pouring her feelings out, and Dash all but teleporting to her when she hears. Cute as heck, I say. Pst. Rainbow Dash. Be gentle with her, or the entire MLP community will have your head. Unless, of course, our little cherry blossom turns into a Venus flytrap in the bedroom, in which case, good luck Dashie, you'll need it.

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With Rainbow and Fluttershy lets just say the old saying applies to Fluttershy about being the quiet one.

It's ALWAYS the quiet ones that are the freakiest!

And so I wonder what that means for you and Twilight

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With Rainbow and Fluttershy lets just say the old saying applies to Fluttershy about being the quiet one.

It's ALWAYS the quiet ones that are the freakiest!

And so I wonder what that means for you and Twilight

Does it mean that dear Sunny Buns is going to end her day splayed out on her back, covered in sweat and Twi-nectar, eyes unfocused and her mind/body drifting on a cloud of euphoria so high meteorologists will claim she's somewhere in the planet's exosphere?

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>.....

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That is terrifyingly accurate

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Does it mean that dear Sunny Buns is going to end her day splayed out on her back, covered in sweat and Twi-nectar, eyes unfocused and her mind/body drifting on a cloud of euphoria so high meteorologists will claim she's somewhere in the planet's exosphere?

Oh I fully plan on unleashing ALL my sexual energy on that little geek! I've suppressed my heat for THREE FUCKING MONTHS!!! She's gonna get it and dammit so am I or so help me Celestia I am gonna go crazy!

Yeeeeeah as you can see Sunset is looking forward to this...A LOT.

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Well, after all the horrors life has thrown at them (demonic transformations, constant danger, social trauma, magical anomalies, Timber Spruce), they deserve to have a night of pure joy with one another. And hopefully a long life of blissful adorkableness.

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-Smirks- Oh trust me they will have their happily ever after if I have anything to say about it. Sunny wasn't joking when she mentioned the perks of having a princess as your bestie ;D And she is one VERY clever little pony.

Ya damn right I am. Best girl for a reason

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Ya damn right I am. Best girl for a reason

You are indeed Sunny, you are indeed. With your minty little Twily being a close enough second you'd have to use the diameter of carbon nano-tube to measure the distance.

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Eeeeeeee science reference!

-Rolls her eyes- Neeeeeeeeeeeeeerd!

You two are fuckin' adorable enough to kill xD

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-Rolls her eyes- Neeeeeeeeeeeeeerd!

Be honest Sunny, its a big part of her charm.

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Plus Sunset is a huge nerd too. I mean have you SEEN her room?

Heeeeey! I'm allowed to being a science geek and love anime just like anyone else!

I bet Twilight is gonna have an orgasm once she sees all the comic books you've drawn

That's part of the plan don't spoil it!!!

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I bet Twilight is gonna have an orgasm once she sees all the comic books you've drawn

That's part of the plan don't spoil it!!!

… and how many of those comics involve you, Twily, lingerie and copious amounts of chocolate syrup (as in the thing you put on ice cream)?

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-Tsundre pony whinnying-

bahahahahahahahahahhahaha xD

No Flutterdash or Flurry Heart in the last chapter. Cumulatively it was TOO CUTE AND MY HEART VERY NEARLY EXPLODED DAMN IT.

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Go for it. I 1000% approve.

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Oh then this last chapter is gonna be the death of you

I think it's adorable that Twi thinks of Cadance as an Auntie.

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Thats what I was going for

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uh oh

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If you die you die!

Twilight looked Sunset in the eyes and smiled that adorkable winning smile of hers. "Because I'm YOUR dork now."

I knew this line was coming sooner or later I did the "I'm your ............" with my ex.

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Twilight is a cheesy hopeless and dorky romantic much like myself so I had to put that in there

"Oh its nothing much. Just the world is a lot brighter-" Sunset smiled and turned to Twilight and brought her close and their foreheads touched. "When there's sunlight in it."

Twilight felt a cord struck. She was silent for a moment as she let those words sink in. Her lips twitched and formed into a wobbly teary smile as she leaned in on her tip toes since she was just a bit shorter than Sunset and kissed her on the lips. Sunset would wrap her arms around Twilight's waist, Twilight's arms hanging off Sunset's neck as their lips met. Feeling more bold now that they were out of view of her family, she allowed Sunset to feel the prodding of her tongue, and Sunset got the message loud and clear. Allowing her tongue to invade the two muscles danced and wrestled for a precious minute until finally they would break apart.

Smiling, Sunset would brush back some of Twilight's hair to get a good look at her beautiful smiling face and would wipe away her tears with her hand.

"That was so sweet. T-Thank you Sunny." Twilight replied as she still felt rather emotional after hearing Sunset say something so sweet to her. It made her feel special. One of a kind. Like nothing could take this moment or that title away from her.

She thinks it's sweet, I say corny.

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Haha that's the point! Glad you enjoy it! It's meant to be like that. I'm 'old fashioned' that way. I want a happily ever after for them and dammit they'll have it if I can help it lol

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I'll toss in another 1000% on top of that!

"Imagine what those rabbits are doing but like...WAY louder."

Now you HAVE to swing it so we can get in on that action!

Fun times all around, might need to get my cholesterol checked after all that cheese.

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Lmao time will tell. Rainbow and Shy are very... experimental in bed with one another and rainbow has a lot of energy and Fluttershy is a super surpressed virgin

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If you are going with that then can it be after they had their first kid or kids and have them be big brothers/sisters to the little bolt.

https://youtu.be/4YuETG5CTno

This is a great story, but I really think that it could be even better if you used commas instead of question marks.

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fair enough. I hear that a lot.

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Also again. easy for people to say I need to edit better when I am literally the only one editing these and almost never get feedback or offers from anyone to edit these after I am finished writing them

I have entire dairy sections dedicated to her!

I’m just imagining every grocery store in a twenty mile radius having a little sign above the milk cooler.

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Damn auto correct lmao I'll fix that

"But...what...how did...?" Fluttershy was completely puzzled as to how Rainbow found out about any of this but then saw Twilight hold up her phone that she seemingly denied a call from earlier and showed that it was on 3-way call with Sunset and Rainbow Dash and that the phone was also on speaker.

Okay, that was slick on Sunny and Twi's part.

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They know how much Shy needs that little extra push and want her to be happy ^_^

I have entire dairy sections dedicated to her!

Dairy sections? I believe you mean diary sections. I don't see what one of the four food groups would have to do with this.

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Ha thanks. I will correct that 😅