The amount of adorkable in this is almost lethal. Please, for the love of the light, keep going. We need more of these two being cute and together in our lives.
[Salacious mode active] Sunny's gonna get herself some tasty Lepechinia fragrans honey, isn't she? Yes she is. She's going to enjoy her favorite nerd's tasty nectar so much.
And Twilight's going to get some hot, fresh peach juice. Yummy Bonita peach flavored Sunny Delight, all for the cutest nerd in all Canterlot. [Salacious mode end]
9758883 It's a page breaker I found while reading other stories here. It makes things flow so much better and helps me break up things because I tend to run on paragraphs sometimes lol
I'll have to find out how to do it myself. I only really know how to do the snowflake one that is built into the Fimfiction editor. It REALLY broke up the sections and made it easier to read.
9758911 I usually use the built in one but once I found that page breaker i just saved the thumbnail as a bookmark and use it in stories where sunset is a or the main character
9759303 Well shit can't have the wrath of Satan come down upon me. Working on Chapter 2 today. Should be up by tonight if the heat doesn't fry my brain
9759549 Thanks but I should be fine ^_^ I honestly would have made this first chapter even longer had I not decided to cut it off where I did. So I am already drafting up the second chapter which should be the climax/conclusion where ALL the sexy stuff(and maybe a musical number) will take place ^_^
Easily one of the best Sunset stories I've read and cute as heck! I can't wait to see how you top this in the next chapter, or at least continue the trend!
Sunset felt a dampness crept between her legs as she thought of Twilight cuddled up next to her.
You had me hooked here.
The Wallflower recap was unexpected and changed the emotional tempo quite drastically, but did definitely help to throw some clay into this metaphorical pottery piece!
Then we get back to the sexy stuff for a bit, nice. Heart cycle too? Neat!
Side note: AJ has a dock in this, or is that just then bantering. Doesn't really change anything, just curious.
Side side note: Rarity and quad-great granny Dazzle huh?
Twilight stopped dead in her tracks and looked at her talking dog like he was crazy. "OF COURSE I AM FREAKING OUT SPIKE! HAVE YOU SEEN SUNSET SHIMMER?! SHE'S...SHE'S SO...PERFECT! SHE'S SMART, FUNNY, WITTY, SEXY AND IS THE SINGLE GREATEST FRIEND I'VE EVER HAD! WHAT IF I MESS THIS UP? WHAT IF SHE DOESN'T LIKE ME THE SAME WAY?! WHAT IF-"
Well now I can definitely say that both Twilights have a tendency of going twily-nanas
"She was the only child I ever gave birth too and as it turns out? Rarity is even related to Diamond Tiara on her mothers side albeit VERY loosely which shouldn't come as much of a surprise but it certainly did when I went to Filthy Rich with the information. Heh unfortunately his wife didn't take it as well as he did and they are in the middle of a divorce but I say all the better for him and his daughter. Spoiled Rich has always been nothing but that...Spoiled since the day she was born." Adagio rolled her eyes and sighed closing the picture album.
I could see Pinkie Pie being Sonata's descendant maybe Fluttershy too, Rainbow and Applejack could be descended from Aria. Might explain why they had equestrian magic ✨✨✨
Coverart sauce: https://derpibooru.org/1754160 (SFW)
The amount of adorkable in this is almost lethal. Please, for the love of the light, keep going. We need more of these two being cute and together in our lives.
[Salacious mode active]
Sunny's gonna get herself some tasty Lepechinia fragrans honey, isn't she? Yes she is. She's going to enjoy her favorite nerd's tasty nectar so much.
And Twilight's going to get some hot, fresh peach juice. Yummy Bonita peach flavored Sunny Delight, all for the cutest nerd in all Canterlot.
[Salacious mode end]
9758610
New chapter should be up tomorrow or by the end of the week depending on how much I can churn out
Ooh! Slightly off topic of your fun story but how did you do that thing with Sunset's Emblem as section breaks? That looks awesome!
9758883
It's a page breaker I found while reading other stories here. It makes things flow so much better and helps me break up things because I tend to run on paragraphs sometimes lol
9758899
I'll have to find out how to do it myself. I only really know how to do the snowflake one that is built into the Fimfiction editor. It REALLY broke up the sections and made it easier to read.
9758911
I usually use the built in one but once I found that page breaker i just saved the thumbnail as a bookmark and use it in stories where sunset is a or the main character
9758914
Hm. . .camo.fimfiction.net/6dEeU4F-RvhqhUZ3VmcJ2jcBGL1EB2_vwYcLcdJWiUo?url=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2F5o7eItX.png
Ah! So that's how you did it then! You have my thanks my friend, and I can't wait to see this story goes on from here.
Long first chapter but definitely worth the read! Look forward to more!
So is it a joke or implied that Applejack has a dick in the story?
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Oh yeah she totally has a dick and Rarity loves it xD
YEEEEEEES that was good! GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS OR FACE THE WRATH OF SATAN
9759303
Well shit can't have the wrath of Satan come down upon me. Working on Chapter 2 today. Should be up by tonight if the heat doesn't fry my brain
9759468
Just don't burn yourself out trying to push things out faster. If you need more time, please take it.
9759549
Thanks but I should be fine ^_^ I honestly would have made this first chapter even longer had I not decided to cut it off where I did. So I am already drafting up the second chapter which should be the climax/conclusion where ALL the sexy stuff(and maybe a musical number) will take place ^_^
Use Dance magic! We haven't done that one yet!
Hm y'know what you right!
9759217
I would imagine she’d be happy lol
9759562
Oh darling you have NO idea
Easily one of the best Sunset stories I've read and cute as heck! I can't wait to see how you top this in the next chapter, or at least continue the trend!
9760020
Next chapter is being worked on as we speak ;D You thought this was cute? Ohohoho you ain't seen shit yet
Tease
I get it from you!
9760027
If that's true, then I am expecting great things!
Just add more Trixie! That Zalla loser loves me!
9760032
Funny you should bring up Trixie because I do plan on doing a fic with her and a certain siren.
Oooo now THAT is a magic show I would love to be apart of!
9760042
YAY! Same here! I'm a huge Arixie Fan myself.
Congratz, you got featured. 7/31/2019
9760049
Nani?!!?
9759468
Awesome!!
9759549
Yeah fr don't go crazy, I've been waiting 5 months for a god damn update on a story and it's just came out but it was worth it
9760069
Dont worry I am taking my time as best I can but Ive always been a fast pace kinda writer lol
9760086
Can't relate
9760089
Its all good
Stupid sexy Sunset...
*grumbles and kicks dirt*
9761243
Oh just wait for chapter 3
Rollllllllercoasterama!
You had me hooked here.
The Wallflower recap was unexpected and changed the emotional tempo quite drastically, but did definitely help to throw some clay into this metaphorical pottery piece!
Then we get back to the sexy stuff for a bit, nice. Heart cycle too? Neat!
Side note: AJ has a dock in this, or is that just then bantering. Doesn't really change anything, just curious.
Side side note: Rarity and quad-great granny Dazzle huh?
Well now I can definitely say that both Twilights have a tendency of going twily-nanas
9850798
Oh you have no idea xD Sci-Twi just hasn't had the lesson Zero moment...yet
I'm not trying to be rude or anything, but you really need to research and gain a proper understanding of commas.
9943937
Easy for anyone to say when I am literally the only one writing and checking the story for errors
As do we all Trixie.
10251372
Indeed! It's the best ship lol
10811595
Haha glad someone liked that joke 😂
I could see Pinkie Pie being Sonata's descendant maybe Fluttershy too, Rainbow and Applejack could be descended from Aria. Might explain why they had equestrian magic ✨✨✨