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The core of justice


Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is necessary before you can meet again. Meeting again,after months or lifetimes is certain for those who are friends.

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Entropy, a human child only a few months old, appears in the world of Equis. Found by princess Celestia, Entropy is raised into a life of royalty but never has he let his power influence him like the nobles of Canterlot, always going out of his way to help others. Enamored by the magical skills displayed by his sister-like friend Sunset Shimmer, and more than slightly jealous he quickly learns she isn't the only one with great magical power. 

thanks to Kaiju4ever for co writing

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 16 )

Looks like a fun read!

I agree with airbomber more please!

Interesting premise. There's just a couple of things bothering me. First, I don't think we ever get an actual description of this child that Celestia found. What does he look like? Second, Entropy means "lack of order or predictability; gradual decline into disorder", which admittedly does have some credence in the story despite Entropy generally being considered a word with negative connotations, but it's odd how Celestia doesn't go with a more pony-like name instead. She's a pony, so would she not default to a name that her kind would use?

Comment posted by The core of justice deleted Sep 12th, 2019

Looking forward to more have a follow!

This is an amazing read! I really can't wait for more

Comment posted by The core of justice deleted Oct 14th, 2019

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thanks and we plan on explaining on why Celestia ended choosing that name for the child she found in the upcoming chapters.

Another great chapter! :pinkiehappy:

That ending part was so cute and wholesome! :heart:

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thanks im glad you enjoyed the chapter

Why do I feel that when Discord will be free, there will be Discord daddy jokes? XD

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i hope you look forward to the next chapter

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(BTW, I didn't read the story. I just saw the title of the fic, and I posted this image just for fun)

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