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PonyPixel


I'm just someone who isn't much of a talker, but does like to share several ideas I've thought of.

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Ember decided to take Garble to Ponyvillie to check on his sister, due to him not knowing where Ponyville is. Though Principle Starlight isn't there at the moment and Garble decides to look for her in Twilight's castle. Spike and Smolder try to stop him as no one's allowed in there without permission.

Things get worse as Garble and Ember come across a certain mirror, which they turn on. One thing leads to another and they get transported to a new world, with new bodies.

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Comments ( 8 )

What an interesting consept. I'll definitely need to read more. I would have checked out the first chapter but 10k is something that I kinda need to save for a slow, rainy day. :twilightsmile:

9776421
Yeah, I thought I should've broken this up into different chapters

A long, but quite enjoyable one-shot. The exchanges and characterizations were quite well done and I LOVED Ember, Smolder and Garble ALL reacting to the their canine forms over in the human world (as a bonus, the fact that this happened to other dragons at least shows that the multiverse ISN'T singling Spike out). Plus Garble and Smolder meeting and working with that gang of street dogs was pretty entertaining, I LOVED Spike's meeting with his native counterpart on the human world and Spike and Ember's reactions to the abilities the girls gained since the last time Spike visited that world were downright priceless.

All in all, truly great stuff.

9777108
Thanks, it's nice to have feedback

Not bad, but you might want to add a spoiler warning at the top.

9778583
It was Spike leaving to Canterlot with Twilight was it?

9778810
Among a few other things, yes.

I like this one
just imagining garble as a dog makes me laugh!
:rainbowlaugh:

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