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James Pwyll


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There were few things that brought Rainbow more joy than being able to practise some of her awesome flying skills in front of an audience, and today it was Rarity's turn to sit and watch in awe as she ruled the skies. But after landing, and joining the latter for some afternoon tea, Rainbow reveals to Rarity a concern she's had for some time.

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A nice story with a good lesson. As always. :twilightsmile:

This is the way I like to think of Rainbow Dash. Very nicely written, with a lot of thought provoking phrases. All in all, it was a lovely story, and I will be reading again. Good work, good work indeed.

There's something about this that feels so real, like it was an actual episode. Everything fits in so perfectly.
Nice job! Loved it.

Huk

Oh, Rainbow I know exactly what you mean... :applejackunsure:

Nicely done, but depressing as hell:ajsleepy:.

Fitting story. Age comes to all of us.

A beautiful little tale. I loved it.

Also... was secretly hoping Twilight would come zooming by, cheerfully yelling "I'm immortal!!!" :rainbowlaugh:

:rainbowlaugh: So nursing a leg is better then nursing a hybrid
:duck: My word after a few months those teeth do become quite sharp
:rainbowderp: ouch!
:raritywink: Wait until you have your own foals
:pinkiehappy: yes yes yes
:facehoof: Wait until you catch your best friend chewing on your crystal castle
:moustache: I wasn't me
:raritycry: Mommy needed her minerals

This is a beautiful read. Wish there were more like it. Have a like and a favorite from yours truly!

It seems most fitting to get a fic like this now, what with the series on the verge of ending. Sort of a reminder to us all that time marches on...but that life doesn't have to end the same time it does. :twilightsmile:

Yeah it's not fun getting your body to remind you you're not as pry as you used to, but it has its perks. A nice piece on growing up beyond a young adult :twilightsmile:

Rainbow, as before, started to look a touch sad. "There'll be a time I'll have to stop though."

Seems to me that Rainbow doesn't ever have to stop. If she never stops, it might kill her! It probably would kill her eventuality. But if she's willing to accept a shorter lifespan, she could keep doing this for the rest of her life.

Great characterization and good story.

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