• Published 1st Aug 2019
  • 12,428 Views, 19 Comments

Letting Things Get Out Of Hand - Barley Citrus



While drinking and hanging out, Twilight is flustered by just how open Cadance is about her sex life. Certain unwanted feelings arise between them but, in the heat of the moment, they just kind of let things get out of hand.

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Comments ( 18 )

Haven't read it yet, but... Isn't it spelled "Epilogue"?

9761311
Shit, you're right
Thanks

9761318
No problem.
Also, post read: fucking hot! Couple of minuscule proofreading errors here and there, and a mild case of "talking heads" (only dialogue, no narration) in the first half, but nothing big enough to distract from the porn. Thumbs up and saved.

9761355
I'm glad you enjoyed it

And feel free to message me with any errors you found
It's a big help

oh cadence did it worng, she was suppose to dump shiny be first of twilight's broodmares, long side the rest of the mane 6 and sunset and everyone else

9761399
Oh no
How could I have made such a glaring mistake in judgement

9761417
lol it ok, would be funnier that she left shiny for his little sister cause she had a bigger cock,

I enjoyed this hehe~ good work 👍

It will be hilarious is sunset told shining about this.

Comment posted by RisingBluePhoenix deleted Sep 19th, 2019

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Little did she know
Sunset would be the most formidable opponent yet

9761582
Wait... how would Sunset know?

Comment posted by RisingBluePhoenix deleted Sep 30th, 2019

Hold on, is this a sequel to Expectations? Or something completely different?

9761732
Completely different

I kind of want to read this, but the impregnation tag and having given the epilogue a glance, this probably takes cucking a bit too far for my tastes. What with Shining not knowing, and likely caring for a foal that's not his own

9765081
That's fair, it's not for everyone
Even I'm not that into most impreg
But maybe give it a chance and just duck out when it gets too weird
You might find something that you like too

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I'd probably have been into it if this was 'past' Flurry, or non-canon-possible in some way. That way, Shining could still potentially find out later and still have the first 'experience' of being a family with Cadance, if you get what I mean

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