(Cover art by Caroo)
If there’s one thing Pharynx hasn’t changed along with physical appearance, it’s his desire for holes. After all, it’s not like one bite-sized hole could hurt a living soul in Equestria, right?
Well, things go just as well as you expect when Pharynx decides to test his wall-kicking skills, for the first time since his transformation, and play a practical joke on the changelings during the latest Feelings Forum meeting.
And if getting his foot stuck in the wall wasn’t Pharynx’s newest personal definition of “public humiliation,” things go off from there when Thorax accidentally pulls his brother’s boots off.
Let’s just say a lot can happen within minutes; not just for Pharynx, but his now-trapped soles.
(Warning: Involves Anthro and foot tickling. Nothing explicit, fortunately.)
Glad to see you’re following your passion!
9907935
Thanks!
Well, I have to say, you've done a great job on this story. Good setup, fun and creative tickling moments, amusing dialogue and tickle talk.
It's a very impressive job, especially for your first published fetish story.
I look forward to seeing what other kind of tickling stories you have in mind.
9908464
Thanks for reading.
And I am looking to have Thorax be the next tickle victim, if I can get some good ideas for him, at least.
This was pretty well-written, enjoyable, featured believable characters for fetish fic context, and the pace was good.
I don't have a fetish for tickling per say but I do find it cute to write and read about. Well done!
That said, if I were a gentleman into tickling I'd say you should do a sequel where Pharynx gets revenge on Thorax, who's sides and belly are his weakest spots.
But that's neither here nor there.
PS: T is fine. Fetish, but nothing explicit. Bare feet and belly buttons are pretty tame.
9910342
Thank you soooo much! I think you just made my day.
9913663
Well, thanks for reading. And good luck!
I'll admit, I don't usually go for this type of story - usually don't even enjoy this type of story.
But!
This was really well-written. I can always appreciate a writer that knows what they're doing, and it was clear that you do. And... in the end, I actually found myself thinking: I'm going to read this again. And I will.
Really, the only thing I'd suggest editing a touch are parts like this:
Writing what you think the laughter sounds like.. takes away from the story - just a little, certainly not a lot. You didn't do this heavily, it's not a problem, just something I'd suggest changing to.. say, a description.
Overall, though.. nice, nice work! This is excellently written. Looking forward to more from you!
9959026
I just usually get it from reading a bunch of other tickle fics who do the laughter thing. Still, I can understand why you feel that way.
Either way, thanks for reading!
I'm not much into foot fetish but I have to admit you did a very well done job writing this out.
10018957
Well, thanks for reading either way.
10018958
You're very welcome.
Great Story! We totally need more of the bug ones! I’m not sure what layout the next one will be. I imagine like Pharynx finds a way to make it torture for thorax so it’s actual karma. Or thorax tickles Pharynx again. I love this story! Good job on this one!
10028341
Thanks. There actually is a sequel already out not that long ago. Unless you’ve already seen it.
10028367
Yeah! That one was cool too! I’m looking for more of Thorax and Pharynx in the future!
10028371
If I was able to commission other tickle writers, I would be able to ask for Pharynx/Thorax tickling. Unfortunately, I’m unable to.
10028372
Will the “gigglebug” be your last one of them?
10028386
Probably not. I just have a hard time deciding on good ideas. I mean, I have a bunch of them, I just can’t always pick just one.
10028388
Alright.. I would create a like “tickle war” type of thing where it goes back and forth.
10028392
That sounds like a good idea! Thorax vs Pharynx
T rated if you ask me... Nothing more than pranking for missbehavior...
10072404
I guess so.
10072415
Giggelbug is no longer working... What happend?
10072447
Oh I took it down. I wasn’t too proud of it. I might rewrite it in the future to be more cute and less kinky, but Idk.
Sorry about that...
10072452
Maybe make 2 versions. Old and new. One kinky one less
10072475
Maybe. Thanks for understanding.
10072475
I keep having writer’s block at random times, especially on MTCG (“Meet The Change Gang.”)
10072493
Happens to the best. Maybe read a story or Two to get your head out of it! I have 6 recommendations:
1. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/454089/thinking-inside-the-box
2. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/344262/the-boopening
3. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/429845/to-be-a-changeling
4. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/101441/the-dusk-guard-saga-rise
5. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/418881/crossing-the-trixie-bridge
6. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/335425/the-wedding-aftermath
Adorable hilarious and it shows his softer side on the fact he lets it go on so long because he loves his dork brother and only changes to escape once others show up
10121953
He just didn’t think of shapeshifting until the idea was suggested to him, but you actually have a better interpretation.
I have a weird headcanon that Pharynx enjoys being tickle-attacked. Being the tsundere he is, however, he just doesn’t like admitting it.
10121956
He's defo a tsundere though the purple and purple black clothing suits him also tiny feets adorable though I bet thersba few tsundere characters in the show
10121962
I also have a few other oneshots similar to this, if you’re interested.
10121973
Neat also you free as a proofreader looking for one to see if I can nail the correct character actions to particular situations and the one I got is complex
10121978
Hmm..
10121984
Sorry about that just like your work and you seem to have a knack for a complex character
10121990
Heh. Thanks, though.
10121993
NP
10121993
Also if you want to do it feel free to on me anytime
10122011
We’ll see.
10442356
What makes you think that?
10442363
Thorax used to be my favorite sort of victim when it comes to writing stuff like this, but for some reason I switched that occupation to Pharynx.
10442373
It was to the point where I wrote two other stories where he’s a tickle victim
10442378
Well, once you submit your first story, you have the option to auto approve your later ones, which takes much less time.
To answer your question, it can take as long as at least a day or so.
10442385
Oh.