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She moved away from her old town to get away from her troubles, being the only pony in the world is tough. Trying to get into a good college is harder, and the stares are the worst. But hey, new town, new chances?

She doesn't know what she's in for, and she doesn't even know where she came from.


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Coverart: https://www.deviantart.com/rutkotka/art/Morning-sunny-tea-666117876

Edits: I changed one of the warning tags to 'Narcotics' instead since language isn't THAT heavy here, trust me uh if you're faint-hearted I promise nothing will be in too much detail and you won't see someone rambling for too long about mature topics or speaking a more mature vocabulary.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 21 )

It's a fascinating concept certainly, but in dire need of an editing pass.

9746079
i suppose so. thanks, i'll have an editor or a friend of mine edit this. ty

This is an interesting story. I’d like to see this turned into a full story, a life where no one likes or loves a talking magical pony in a human world

(Yet again, can’t describe anything!)

I actually miss the Ponies on Earth idea. You have my interest.

Not new concept, but hasn't been explored much.

9746682
have you read this one? Redemption

9746805
I read it when it started, but forgot about it, forgot to favorite it, and couldn't read it, welp, now I'm going to finish it.

Please Sir, may we have some moar?

Oh, what an interesting premise. Looking forward to seeing more!

Ohoho! Ace Lestia!
Also hoodies, the big sad, and an exploration of segregation?

Count me in!

9746079 OUCH. British solidarity, come to me. My precious feelings! :(

Take a look at it again! It has been edited since you read it. Tried to just clean up some grammar/phrases here and there, though not enough to change the story in any way.

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Marvelous, much tidier.

9749848 Yay! My precious feelings!

This is really good, please continue!

Ah, so this is continuing. Grand.

Personally, I'd recommend going for the gore, as long as he's got her head right there and all. Of course, that would be a rather severe escalation, perhaps a sharp kick? She's got those hooves after all.

You sir have peeked my interest, keep at it :pinkiehappy:

Aiet, what a terrible place to be.

Enjoy the rest of your holidays mate! See yah when you get back :P

Enjoy the rest of summer vacation, this was a great read and I can't wait for you to continue!

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