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Being against evil doesn't make you good.

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During a class trip to Manehattan, a teenage Cheerilee has the most embarrassing experience of her life. Fortunately, fellow student and friend Vinyl Scratch is there to help her through the pain—and in the process, teach her something important about who she is.


Written for Trotcon 2019's Speedfics-R-Us panel, with minor revisions after. The prompt: write a story involving Cheerilee, Vinyl Scratch (a.k.a. DJ P0N-3), and Manehattan.

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Meanwhile, I don't even know what my cutie mark means. What kind of pony doesn't understand her cutie mark?

Ah, sweet irony.

Fantastic backstory for these two, with some excellent character interaction. Thank you for it.

I like this story! In particular I like that we don’t really get it spelled out what “happened”, though we can make a few inferences. Noodle incidents are always fun.

In my own alternate universe I made Cheerilee the Element if Laughter in something of a whim, but I do like coming across stories that feel like they could be used to justify that choice. Other authors have done a better job with it than me.

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I’d just like to take a moment to comment that you are friggin’ everywhere on this site, dude. It’s impressive. :twilightsmile:

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He knows all. He sees all.

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You can't be a fan of almost everything if you haven't seen almost everything.

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Like I said, it’s impressive.

hmm, that's some really good backstory there :)

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Ggh, this is still really great.

PresentPerfect reviewed this story over here. :twilightsmile:

This was a really nice story.
Atill wondering what happened but I guess that's supposed to be a mystery.

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Given the sex tag, and the thing about it being all over her hooves, I assumed that she ”relieved” herself, even though the most automatic assumption would be that she peed herself, but again the sex tag speaks a hundred words.

I still feel kinda dirty assuming it, though, given how they’re meant to be foals in this scenario. But y’know, some kids are just like that, and Vinyl calling her a slut doesn’t help eliminate my theory.

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You're probably right.

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