One day my heart felt heavy so I set it down. Then I lost it, someone stole it because it was made of gold. Yours looks heavy, can I borrow a piece? I'll return it when I find mine.
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Fluttershy is told by one of her robins that there is a pony who's lost in the Forest; and because it’s getting dark, she decides to help him. Come to find out, he’s lost not only physically, but mentally as well. She has to tread carefully to gain his trust. Especially when she finds out how scared he is that she, Fluttershy, and her friends might hurt him. What will the mane six have to go through to figure out where this mystery stallion came from?
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This looks good
I really like this I hope that you continue it
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You wouldn’t happen to know where I might also have this posted for others to read would you?
Because right now I don’t have a clue.
9743232
You can posted in the group I want a comment or in the group the seamless shelf promotion.
I love it, more plz
9743232
I got it, posted it on both Slice of Life and The Shameless Self Promotion
9747160
thank you very, very much
how did you like it if I may ask?
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Your welcome!
I think it’s a good start. A little fast pace which isn’t bad. Your welcome to make them longer if you choose.
Oddly enough I was talking to another writer a few days ago about there not being stories on here with disabilities like with Good Light. Looking forward to see how this will go.
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This is actually for a contest that the user ArtistFire set up related to stories about disabilities.
9747254
Yay, Love it
Gosh Dang it!*
:)*
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I don’t mean to come out as rude while I type this, but would you mind clarifying what you mean? 
furthermore I’m not a fan of that kind of language. Might I suggest keeping it cannon perhaps?
What?
Sorry
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Sorry!
I just meant the pun at the end!
"Applejack was out like a light."
Great story! And again sorry!
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No worries, thanks.
I’m curious, what did you like about this story? I’m interested to know. Currently I’m having trouble with it, so maybe you can help me see what needs to be more focused on.
A readers perspective, you could call it.
I liked it when he was shy and all. Though feels to... odd with Light.
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odd how?
Thanks for this
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The more I write (in what little free time I have) the more it feels too rushed. So what I’m asking is, are you still able to follow what’s going on? What do you like about it so far?
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I’m still able to follow what’s going on, but it is a little bit confusing but that’s OK, I really like the character interactions.
Oh no, wonder what happens next.
Thanks so much
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How did it sound?
The only reason I’m asking is because the amount of feedback I’m getting isn’t enough to tell me how much I’m doing right and what I’m getting wrong.
9852445
It very great. Me like it
Cool, I like it