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"you horses are such clods.."

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It's been so long since Luna had been banished, but by her banishment, she lost something. A foal. Nightmare Moon had to almost watch her daughter grow alongside strangers and her sister. She is back for the throne and something...else? The tears of the moon should be shed no longer.


Cover art source: https://www.deviantart.com/lulubellct/art/Stardust-335929363 ( final change, haha. )

Disclaimer: Yes, I decided to change some things, but they're only minor. I got unhappy with it all quick, so I do apologize. The story itself isn't affected. Also, the cover-art changes are because some turning out too small? Hope nobody minds.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 78 )

You did well. I am....interested to see where you go with this....

"Thank you for being the best student in all of Equestria."

You'd think since Celestia is saying this in her mind she'd call Twilight her niece instead of her student.

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shame nobody told twilight who her real mom is.

damn, those letters are just sad. i cant wait to see where this goes

My heart broke at this, it seriously did.

can't wait for the next chapter.

This chapter came out pretty fast and I loved it. Can’t wait for the next one! The letters almost made me cry...:fluttershysad:
You got this story on the correct path!

Two chapters released in one day is an accomplishment! Good job.

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well uh, thank you! i had fun writing it so. well, i literally just now released another chapter, oddly. :twilightsheepish: sksksk

Great chapter, i’d didn’t think that Celestia could travel through time. But love the conflict!:twilightsmile:

well... after reading the last chapter, I have to confess that I really dislike Nightlight and twilight Velvet. no, I must say it, I hate them, how could they ever think of doing that to luna. she deserves to at the very least meet Twilight, and she deserves a chance to be her own daughter's mother. and twilight deserves a chance to meet her birth mother and deserves the chance or at least the choice to be a family. and they have no right to force a 20-year old into choosing not to meet her.

I only wish Twilight overheard this... :(

"Do you think she'll find out on her own? She is a bright mare." Twilight Velvet quietly asked, which snapped him out of his little train of thought, he rubbed the back of his head quietly. "...I hope not, I want to be her only mom Nightlight, it might also make her feel like she isn't apart of the family." She said in a weak voice.

"I'm still her father." Nightlight turned slightly, his head lowered sorrowfully. Twilight Velvet opened her jaw to speak, but nothing came out. "... She can't know, how would she react anyway? That her whole life was a lie? When it wasn't... we're her parents. Celestia is her mentor, biologically her aunt, but in the end her mentor. Blood makes no difference."

"Well, if you must know. Yes, I did. I'm sorry, but I believe my sister should know her daughter, even Luna is aware of her existence in the future. I have sent a single letter, even if my sister finds herself angry with me, I will not deny her updates on her daughter's location. I feel so bad for ripping Twilight from Luna."

I love you so much, Celestia! thank the gods twilight will be able to meet her

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yeah, i love them in the show, but i got mad while writing her dialogue. that's how bad it is, but i know they have SLIGHTLY good intentions. twilight 100% should have a choice.

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yeah, it's not canon since the only time it was possible was when the elements of harmony through the map was involved, however, its an alternate universe, I would not turn down a possibly good story :pinkiehappy:

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yes! it has the alt. universe tag for a reason. haha

This was really good can't wait for the next chapter.

This was really good and I wonder if Twilight as an infant in a cryostasis chamber by Celestia during the 1,000 years before the Luna returns?

9740517
she has the flux capacitor lol

Just a small thing. I've noticed the word "ringed" used several times when it should have been "rang." Still a great story, though.

Nice job this is really well written and packed full of emotion! Keep up the good work

Great story looking forward to seeing more

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alright, ty. i'll edit that

*Reads the end of the chapter*
Reaction- Oh My!! Twilights adoptive parents are selfish!!!:facehoof:

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a little bit yeah, they love twilight a little too much i'd say, but in a bad way. over protective, and very obsessive of their daughter.

I guess of them being afraid if twilight found out , that she would hate them... just a guess.

...You know the truth will out eventually, it's only a matter of time. How long Night Light? You know she's coming back. Would you rather you hear it from her, instead of you and have your daughter hate you even more? Guess so.

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nightlight is very hecking foolish. :facehoof:

*Nightmare Moon walks to Twilight*
*Twilight hanging off a side*
Nightmare: Join my cause...
Twilight: Never! You killed my mother!
Nightmare: No Twilight. I Am Your Mother!
Twilight: NNNNOOOOO!!!!!!!!

(Couldn’t resist:rainbowlaugh:!)

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that is the most brilliant thing i've read all day. thank you for blessing me with this

So, instead of telling Twilight and her possibly hating them for hiding the truth, they're headed in the direction of her definitely hating them and them losing her. They will have only themselves to blame.

They really did... Velvet and Nightlight, you should be ashamed of yourself!!:twilightangry2:

Nightlight had the faintest whisper, one only Twilight herself could her in the eerie nature and sorrowful atmosphere of the room, "Just a fling, sweetheart."

are they trying to make Twilight hate them?

Man things are getting intense. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Yeah this is going to end badly at least celestia is trying I mean she feels guilty about it but at the end of the day it has to be her so called parents that have to tell her

I wasn't aware you could put emojis in the titles of your stories. Please respond to this comment.

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yes, you can. i don't see it very often.

"On the moon." Twilight's voice left her as the rain heavied all of a sudden. "Do not come back." SLAM.

DAMN... I have a feeling nightlight is going to regret that

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Seconded, this is not going to end well for Nightlight.

Also poor Twilight, no one deserves to be treated like that. At least Twilight now has a goal... and since when has the fact anything has been nearly impossible ever stopped her.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

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