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Raugos


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Reforming criminals is admittedly a useful skill, but then again, had they been properly educated from youth, they wouldn’t have become criminals in the first place, would they?

"I nearly destroyed time and space because my best friend went away to a boarding school."
"And you didn't. I rest my case."

Wonderful madness from start to finish. I always appreciate multiversal shenanigans, and these were top-notch. Best of luck in the judging.

NB4 feature box. This is gonna be good.

Bamboozled again!

“That’s it. I’m taking her cutie mark away,”

I think I need to see Starlight react with this line in more fics.

Once again Raugos steps up to the plate and bats it out of the park.

Darn good job on this fan-fiction. Yeah, the multi-versal shenanigans were quite well done. Love how in-character the characters were. And, yeah, makes sense that Twilight's curiosity concerning the multiverse would lead to something like this. And, yeah, the encounters with Archmage Twilight, Changeling Queen Twilight, Dragonlord Twilight, Bonelight and Equalist Dusk were VERY well done (though, in the last case, if THEY didn't send Dusk back, DISCORD would have concerning how he was flirting with Fluttershy).

Anyway, the exchanges, (as aforementioned) the characterizations and general wrap-up were all quite entertaining.

Aw, no Twiny? Darn it.

Still very good, though; glad I read it.

“In my defence, the chance of a resonance cascade happening was supposed to be really, really slim!”

Oh, that's what they all say. :rainbowlaugh:

“Oh buck, you’ve goatee be Kirin me!”

Oh, boooo, that gag's gotta be the most forced one I've read for the Feghoot yet. :trollestia:

In all seriousness, though, fun read. :twilightsmile:

I NEED A SEQUEL

THIS STORY IS TOO GOOD TO BE LEFT OFF THERE ARGHVDJDBKSNXNICNSKANDH

The pun was kinda meh, but the rest of the story was great!

Even it was feghoot-free, this was fantastic.

Good story. Bad pun.

Is Sci Twi part of this?

Oh man, all of these alternate Twilights would make excellent stories on their own.

I really want to read a story about Dragonlight and Bonelight.

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"I nearly destroyed time and space because my best friend went away to a boarding school."
"And you didn't. I rest my case."

"Well, there was this filly who tried to take over Equestria specifically because she went to school!"
"Yeah. A school for friendship. What kind of curriculum is that?"

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Oh well, one out of two ain't half bad! :derpytongue2:
Wait... :rainbowderp:

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Not explicitly, I'm afraid. At best, you can imagine she's one of the off-screen appearances, but that's about it.

Can we have more Bonelight? We need more Bonelight.

Fantastic.

Argh. That was terrible. Shouldn't there be a lethal puns tag?! :rainbowlaugh:

A few of those characters could honestly make for an interesting story, though.
Also a shame that they didn't keep one. It sounds like a few of her friends might have wanted that. Heh.

Fantastic and groantastic! Well done. :rainbowkiss: :twilightblush:

He then winked at Fluttershy, who giggled and practically melted into a puddle of butter.

Oh dear.

Hopefully you're alright Flutters.

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I believe you meant to say "You butter be all right Flutters" :rainbowdetermined2:

if this story had a sequel,i really want to see a Rick Sanchez version of Twilight( Twilight Sanchez and Spike Smith?) come out on another portal and fix their problem
just a though :facehoof:

9739613 Spike is absolutely Morty. This must become a thing.

9738258 I've seen the most highly educated people form the most ruthless regimes.

Without possessing a conscience and remorse, knowledge merely permits someone to craft even more diabolical schemes.

There will always be the natural-born psychopaths. All you can do with them is shove em off a cliff before they do it to someone else.

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You shouldn't be.

I wouldn't have thought that up at all.

“Oh buck, you’ve goatee be Kirin me!”

:twilightangry2:

“Not to mention the fact that he was feeding us propaganda about Starlight’s anti-cutie marks-ism!”

I see what you did there. :raritywink:

Ugh. Fluttershy, you can do much, much better.

Somehow, the idea of equality marks sharing talents seems even worse than just sapping them. All of the power, none of the price. No sacrifice, no accomplishment. Just a lot of stuff you never earned, cheapening everything that you have. Shudder.

Great story, it was cute and fun! :twilightsmile: Given some of her S1 shenanigans, Twilight is surprisingly easy to see as a kirin...

I feel like this entire story was made just for the single line at the end. I am completely okay with that. And I am not okay with that.

Too bad there was not a Draconequs Twilight, Godess of Chaos

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*Ding!

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Draconequus Twilight was one of the early considerations, but it'll probably be one of the longest encounters, and unfortunately, I'm working with a strict word limit. :fluttercry:

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Somehow, the idea of equality marks sharing talents seems even worse than just sapping them.

Not to mention that this is assuming everything he says is true. Who knows what he might be whitewashing or glossing over in that rosy summary of his?

Amazing story, also there's a lack of version of Twilight...

Including the human's version

This story deserves a sequel regardless of the competition. The multiple Twilights feel like they need their own chapters

As much as I’ve found this fun and hilarious, it also reminded me of my pet peeves when it comes to prompts and ideas. Namely, Overpowered characters having a horrible personality. Also, Equalist Dusk Shine just flat out pisses me off. I don’t know if it’s from his personality, the fact that his “equality” is too ideal for a story to work, or anything.

But enough about my pet peeves, let’s go on to favorite parts! Dragonlord Twilight ranks number 1 in the whole fic, as it showed a powerful alternate universe twilight, with a nice personality that befits the character concept. Not only that, but the threat that was offered and the solution to it were very close to what could be imagined as part of the show.

Anyway, I’m putting this in my favorites. Good job!

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Maybe for the sequel? There will be no word limit for that, right?

That was fun, even if it was an overly long setup for that joke at the end. You monster. :twilightsmile:

Nice work on the chapter could you do goddess of chaos:twilightsmile::rainbowlaugh:

This is good, even without being a part of the Feghoot Contest.

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Also, Equalist Dusk Shine just flat out pisses me off. I don’t know if it’s from his personality, the fact that his “equality” is too ideal for a story to work, or anything.

Well, this is assuming everything he says is true. Who knows what he might be whitewashing or glossing over in that rosy summary of his?

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Archmage Sparkle was very interesting one. I've thought she was overzealous at first but she does have a point, her method helped Gallus and she's not wrong about rehabilitation being second best to proper upbringing - why fix villains when you can fix what made them so?

Over 8000 words of setup for a really bad pun.
I am not sure if i should be surprised, mad, or laughing my butt off. Good job.

Was I the only one that felt bad for Bonelight?

Also, damnit, I should’ve known!

The character should just be glad the portal didn't come across any of the many many versions if R34 Twilight :twilightoops:

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No, you weren’t, Bonelight deserves better!

I injoyed the story, but to be honest, I don’t get the pun.

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"Oh, you've got to be kidding me" = "Oh, you've goatee be kirin me"

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Oh, eh, not very funny in my opinion.

My fav was bonelight id read her fanfic

“And he’s a married stallion!” Twilight continued. “Not to mention the fact that he was feeding us propaganda about Starlight’s anti-cutie marks-ism!”

DAS KAPITAL!

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