After I save my conciseness in a computer, I live my life from then on. but then equestria is formed out of the former remains of earth.
(This story works off the theory that equestria is earth in the future.)
Act 1: Chapters 1-12
Act 2: 13-23
Act 3: 24-ongoing
Mini Act 1: 26-29
P.s. this story also involves a bit of romance.
How rich can you really get from selling old computer adapters?
1.6 million years into the future? The old guy never bothered to upgrade his old 100 years old ps/2 computer? Get out! No computer system would survive that long without serious futuristic upgrades.
There's a magic spell around the house keeping it in perfect condition, I'm was going to put that fact in one of the future chapters.
I'm gonna be honest this story doesn't seem well All that flushed out I mean there is room for improvement but It feels sloppy 1/2 worked on Everything's moving so quickly There is nothing that you want to identify with the character Like I feel how they feel And I understand And that whole thing with magic is the reason why the house end equipment still works It just feels like a lazy way of saying it just works because I say it works To me this seems like a bad displace fan fact That doesn't have other people involved other writers But then again I love the whole premise of an AI from the far distant pass Meets equestria in fact I have one story that I absolutely love and wish to continue I'll post it later so you can see what it is but again I love the premise trying to do
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/321377/spark-of-humanity
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If you have any suggestions on how to make it better, I’m all ears.
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You have a Discord?
Celtic for 'horned one'.
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Named after the Celtic god of nature
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This just in, I won’t be working on this until next week, I totaled my truck, so I’m looking for a new one.
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I knew that one, but had the urge to look up the translation.
I'm gonna be adding a new chapter soon, expect it before next weekend.
You could replace that with [ hr] to get
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Thanks for the tip
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To be fair, I needed the tip before, so...
I just got back from the NASCAR race at Talladega Super Speedway, it was awesome, I’ll work on the next chapter this weekend.
This something i wanted to read in a mlp story! Hope to see more soon
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Glad you like it, I’ll publish a new chapter this weekend or next week.
I'm a bit busy with finals, I'll make the new chapter soon.
Good news, I’m graduating community college on December 15th
Nice story, can't wait to read more.
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I’m releasing a new chapter in a few days.
Sorry, had a small case of writers block, I’ll publish the new chapter sometime this week or next.
what will he do now. Make a settlment around him? He proberbly could and also defend it well. Maby with help later on he can make a diffrent place to put his brain in. an underground base perhaps
For those wondering, the barrier works like the one in the Smurf’s movie. Where it hides any buildings, making it look like an empty forest clearing.
How is this an adventure story?
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It is to me, but I can change it to slice of life if you want.
I had the idea that the house he lived in looked like the cover pic but thank you for giving the basic whiteprint
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It’s does look like the house in the cover pic, the white print is what the houses look like that Lugh and the deer built around the one in the cover pic.
Meanwhile at my house
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Lol, that made me laugh so hard.
"So let it be written, so let it be done; etc, etc, etc."
"Huh?"
"You got the job, pal."
I’ll release a new chapter late next week
This is going well. I'm not sure I agree with the premise that religion is necessary for a society, but it is something that tends to pop up regardless so I guess planning it out beforehand is a good idea.
Fun fact: If society were to reset, dollars to donuts the currency would be based on gold, because it's very good at being what it is. It's too soft to do anything too harmful with, but too hard to swim in, so why let it pool so?
And hasn't for... how long?
I think it's meant to be where is it?
And this chapter was Way to fast.
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Well, she didn’t know where it was.
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No I think that was a grammatical error it doesn't feel smooth at all.
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what error? do I need to remove the word well?
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No it's written where it is but where is it flows better.
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ok, I fixed it
also, I don't think the chapter was too fast, its fine how it is.
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No you were definitely rushing.
But to late to change it now still a relaxing story.
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I’m redoing chapter 8, I’ll republish it in a few days.
I’ll republish chapter 8 near the end of the week.
I’ve been busy lately, but I’ll work on the next chapter or two over spring break.
Sorry for the lack of updates, I’ve been busy with applying for university housing, I’ll publish a new chapter sometime next week.