Circular Reasoning

Wild Fire has an accident. Her coworkers have a brief chat about that.

Written for Fimfiction Feghoot Festival. I'm not sure why am I doing this to myself.

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Hopeful_Ink_Hoof

Hopeful_Ink_Hoof #1 · Jul 14th, 2019 · 9 · ·

The joke wasn't bad. A little gross for my liking, but not bad.

There's a bigger problem though.
With all that this story has set up, I actually want to read more of this little world.

Huk

Huk #2 · Jul 14th, 2019 · 1 · ·

"I’m just dead tired of this shit!”

Ha, ha very... punny Also, mandatory image:

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SolidBlackPanda

SolidBlackPanda #3 · Jul 14th, 2019 · · ·

Worth the pun.

Jaro45

Jaro45 #4 · Jul 15th, 2019 · 1 · ·

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Same. I wanna see just how shady Lightning Dust (and her "friends") are. Plus, seeing Gilda beat, kick or otherwise pummel her frustrations away on someone is cathartic. I need the violence.

hanatoro

hanatoro #5 · Jul 15th, 2019 · · ·

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I second this motion.

RK_Striker_JK_5

RK_Striker_JK_5 #6 · Jul 15th, 2019 · · ·

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Thirded. We now vote... motion carries!

Seriously? Pretty damned good, Samey. As usual from you.

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #7 · Jul 15th, 2019 · 2 · ·

You really have established a fascinating setting in addition to an excellent groaner. Thank you for both. Best of luck in the judging.

Samey90

Samey90 #8 · Jul 15th, 2019 · · ·

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While writing, I was thinking whether the setting is close enough to It's the End of the World as We Know It to consider Bulk and Lightning Dust to be in-laws, but I didn't mention that after all.

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A pun in the oven?

Gyro Pony