Friction

Unshackled_Unbroken #1 · Jan 15th, 2020 · · 6 ·

A smirk crept on Tempest’s face. “You’re going to eat those words, Sentry.” Flash really didn’t like the smoothness in her tone, but it didn’t matter. If Tempest planned to interfere, it sure as Tartarus wouldn’t end pretty, because a Royal Guard never surrendered. Especially not when the prize was somepony as amazing as Twilight.

Amazing as her... Oh she is amazing! The enemy doesnt know how to fvcking plan an attack, along with Chrysalis who got beat by her own food. And let us not forget about Sombra, who is an idiot, gor not finishing THEM OFF, WHILE THEY ARE STOMPED BY FEAR! Even working together they are idiots! IS IT NOT EASY TO JUST KILL THEM!? YOU HAVE THE POWERNOF THE ALICORNS AND CHAOS MAGIC IN YOUR GRASP AND YET YOU LOST TO LOUSY LASER BEAM?! Geez, if they just straight up kill the elements I wouldnt be shouting in the comments! You may do anything to her! I dont care! READ MY USERNAME: NO DARNS GIVEN

Unshackled_Unbroken

Unshackled_Unbroken #2 · Jan 15th, 2020 · · 5 ·

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10035101
This is not a hate comment, Im just angry on how stupid villains are. Only block without dodge...

Plough and Stars Pony

Plough and Stars Pony #3 · Jan 15th, 2020 · · ·

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Where did you find the cover-pic?

Critical Hit

Critical Hit #4 · Jan 16th, 2020 · 3 · ·

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Sequel plz

Nocturna

Nocturna #5 · Jan 16th, 2020 · 2 · ·

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Hello 10035101,

Love, as all things that radiate so brightly and hot, also tends to blind. Perhaps, subjectively, Twilight is not the greatest mare in the world for you. But she is in the eyes of Flash. His personal preferences, overlapping with Tempest’s, are all that matters in this context. The recent events in Ponyville, and other Equestrian cities by extent, do little change this version of Flash, nor his infatuation, or perception.

That being said, I deal in fiction meant to be entertaining and be enjoyed. If this story doesn’t qualify as such for you, I’d prefer it if you’d just close the tab and move on with your day. Nobody enjoyed listening to your disjointed unloading of emotions, or your extensive use of the caps lock button. If a polite conversation continues to remain beyond your authorial abilities, I will begin to moderate my stories’ comment sections.

Sincerely,
Nocturna

Hi 10035454,

all my art pieces are commissioned from my good friend Early Bird, as my own anthology will show you over time. For now though, she doesn't have an account on this site, and prefers to remain anonymous as I progress with my work.

I will ask her to upload all uncensored versions on a website eventually, though, so I can share them here with you all. Trust me, the wait will be worth it ;)

So long!
~Nocty

Hello 10037225,

I'm actually working on that right now. Life in Canterlot keeps me busy, but I believe I will be able to publish a sequel before the begin of spring (or, before Winter Wrap Up, depending on where you live.) Make sure you follow me so you don't miss it ;)

I may even upload a blog post on occasion to keep you and my other followers updated.

Cheerio!
~Nocty

Critical Hit

Critical Hit #6 · Jan 16th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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10037351
Awesome! look forward to reading it =3

Lurks-no-More

Lurks-no-More #7 · Apr 29th, 2020 · 3 · ·

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Angry Flashpest closet sex! I choose to believe they end up as a couple firmly and mutually dedicated to hating each other forever, and screwing their brains out at every chance.

dirty little secret

dirty little secret #8 · May 27th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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This is your official review from Dirty Little Secret's Dirty Little Contest!
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------ Review ------

Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-Extremely hot concept that really keeps things boiling with sexual tension.
-Needs more of a conclusion after they get caught.
-Kind of feels like it's missing the penetration as the finishing touch.
-But it does what it does very hotly.

------ Scores ------

To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 87/100
Allure: 99/100
Enticement: 84/100
Immersion: 94/100
Prose Quality: 92/100
Total Score: 456/500
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dirty little secret

dirty little secret #9 · Jun 10th, 2020 · 2 · ·

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Congratulations on winning Dirty Little Secret's Dirty Little Contest!
For the full results, check the Dirty Little Award Show.

This story won:

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Popping the Cherry
The best clopfic by someone who's never published a clopfic before. Don’t worry, we’ll be gentle with it.
(Cannot be combined with the top 3 prizes. Cannot be combined with other new writer’s prizes. If you also qualify to win one of those, this prize will be awarded to the runner-up in this category.)

JSAR1562

JSAR1562 #10 · Apr 16th, 2021 · · ·

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This was both sexually frustrating and hilarious! I'd love a damn sequel with an orgie and/or that awkward conversation but it's a fantastic stand alone. (Adds to masturbation shelf).

Moon_Fire