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After sacrificing himself to save Kairi, Sora wakes up in Equestria where he must help his new friends defeat Grogar and his group of villains, and an old enemy, before returning to his world.

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He woke up in Shibuya

Sweet Celestia, Rarity! The hay is wrong with you?

Did Spike still have a crush on Rarity in this story? If so, I daresay, that crush would have vanished in an instant because he's now realised that Rarity is a jealous b***h

Mares and Gentlecolts, prepare yourself for the upcoming "Tension Rising".

The synopsis makes it sound like you're giving away the ending. You should fix it.

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What bit of the chapter sounds like I’m giving away the ending?

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No, you misunderstand me. The synopsis is this part:

After sacrificing himself to save Kairi, Sora wakes up in Equestria where he much help his new friends defeat Grogar and his group of villains, and an old enemy, before returning to his world.

The way it's written it sounds like Sora will defeat all the enemies and then return home. At the very least, though, we aren't told how he's going to do it, so there's that.

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Sora won’t be defeating all of them, he’s helping them defeat Grogar and his legion of doom

And I can’t give away how they’re gonna defeat them

Hmm. I'm gonna need to read this real quick 👀

Two more members?? Another fellow keyblade wielders? Or someone else?

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Someone else, and one of them is a pony, and the second creature I'm not gonna day

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Interesting. Welp, guess I just have to wait for the next chapter.:pinkiehappy:
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Hold on a second🤔......... where's Tempest?!:pinkiecrazy:

Comment posted by OliverSparkle deleted Sep 25th, 2019

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You’ll have to find out soon, it might not be her

Honestly... why is Lightning Twister so afraid of Cold Wind.
When do we get to the part where he finally stands up against his father?

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Because he’s six year old, and his father has been scaring and hurting him for six years before he ran away from him and Fluttershy took him in just before his birthday was about to come up

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Point taken, but eventually, even a young child must have enough of the abuse.

great story so far i have a feeling that lighting twister might get a keyblade

Great chapter. So Chrysails is Oliver's real mother?, how interesting.

whoa plot twist more more next chapter please::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

I dont understand, Sora wakes up in Shibuiya

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This is set in a different universe

I’ll just leave this here.

you never stop to amaze me cant wait for the battle and the ending to come if lightning get a keyblade i think it can be the oathkeeper keyblade:pinkiehappy:

awesome chapter fluttershy as woody priceless i see chicken run reference it look like lightning going to dive into his heart and find his light and get oathkeeper or braveheart keyblade:pinkiehappy:

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Oh he will , in the next chapter, with help from another Kingdom Hearts character :raritywink:

Nice chapter, no doubt that Lightning will get a keyblade of his own. Speaking of which, when the next chapter going to be?.

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Whenever it’s done and it’s in perfect writing

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I agreed with you.

There is no doubt in my mind that Lightning is going to be a keyblader, just like Sora.

Excellent chapter, Lighting has finally got his keyblade, thank to Aqua.

good work i cant wait to see sora's reaction to lighting's keyblade oatkeeper is my favorite keyblade i will like to see lighting do ars arcanum and trinity limit i hope sora get a new keyblade can't wait for the next chapter" MY FRIENDS ARE MY POWER" sora and lighting said together:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

I can see it now. Cold Wind... about to be chewed out by his wife's spirit for what he has done.

awesome chapter keep it up nice finding nemo and kingdom hearts 1 and 3 reference can't wait for the ending i play distant from you from kh ddd while read the part while aqualight explain herself just like in the kingdom hearts 3 when vanitas explain himself:pinkiehappy:::twilightsmile:

Great chapter, with the villain been defeated, and Lightning Twister's real mother made her appearance. Look like she going to give Cold Wind a piece of her mind for what he has done.

Everything turned out just fine.
Hopefully, the next story will be just as great.

love it i hope before the story end lighting twister and smolder share a papou friut like kairi and sora i cried during lighting saw his mother one more time i wish i saw my mom one more time to but she will be in my heart just like lighting mom in his keep up the great work cant wait for the ending:twilightsmile:

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I’m sorry about your mother, and I think there will be a Lightning and Smolder moment in the last chapter :raritywink:

And yeah, I cried on the Lightning seeing his mother again part as well while writing this

Marvelous chapter, Rain Heart was not impressed for what her former husband done to her son. I'm glad that Lightning is seeing his mother again. Serve Cold Wind right.

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At least Rain Heart will watch over her son from the heaven.

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And if she’s lucky enough, she can appear as a spirit again at Lightning and Smolder’s wedding

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Did you say Wedding?, nice. I'll looking forward to see Lightning and Smolder getting married. No doubt in my mind that Smolder will be lovely as a bride.

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Can’t confirm it just yet, but it may happen someday

And yeah I have to agree, she would look lovely as a bride, especially since she likes being cute

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That's remind me, have you aware of Garble, Smolder's brother?, I wonder what did he think of lighting twister.

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