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"You have a lot of time to think to yourself when you get stuck. Thinking of things like life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness. How did I get here? When did I get here? Why did I get here. All the W's, starting with The Who. Oh well. This will get resolved somehow... I hope"
-Derpy Hooves

Written for SuperTrampoline's Feghoot contest

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Golden Fang Ryu Shenron

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #1 · Jul 12th, 2019 · · ·

Speaking of how Dinky was born, I’ve been having deja vu to back in those days since these weird mornings started up where I wake up in a hurry to go puke. I have half a memory of a wild night involving Doc and I at one of Berry’s parties. It certainly isn’t a bad half-memory, but it isn’t a safe one. I should know better, and he should definitely know better, but when you get invited to one of Berry’s parties, you don’t go home sober… or alone, more often than not. Actually, that was probably our biggest mistake in the first place. We went to one of Berry’s parties.

Of course it's one of Berry Punch's parties!!!

Oh well. I guess it wouldn’t be too bad if that were the case. I wouldn’t mind, and it’d be enough of an excuse to make this thing permanent. Wouldn’t it be nice if I could finally do things the right way? It always ends up backwards for me. I’m not the smartest pony in the world, I haven’t been able to see right for most of my life, and I get taken advantage of a lot. He’s the only one who’s ever been nice to me for no reason, and I think that says a lot about him. Heck, he even takes care of Dinky about as much as I do these days, maybe that wasn’t a bad night after all?
Ooh! I could finally get a dress from Rarity’s shop, and we could invite Twilight and the princesses to the wedding! I could see mom and dad again, and I could get him to finally introduce me to his family, and he could… move in and maybe… maybe it could finally be… Pure and Easy…

We'll see Derpy, we'll see!!!

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PresentPerfect #2 · Jul 23rd, 2019 · · ·

That was tremendously fun.

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KorenCZ11 #3 · Jul 23rd, 2019 · · ·

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Glad you enjoyed it. I think with Smashed. as a sort of practice run in the genre, this ended up as a more direct and well constructed feghoot. It was inspired by an ATG prompt, and everything was done on the same day. It all lined up pretty well.

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PresentPerfect #4 · Jul 23rd, 2019 · · ·

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I agree, this was your better entry from where I stand. :)

KorenCZ11

KorenCZ11 #5 · Jul 23rd, 2019 · 1 · ·

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I like Smashed., and it is part of the reason why my next long story is going to be what it is, but this is definitely the better feghoot.

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