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Popping Candies


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Turns out, Sombra is back, wow. Discord takes it upon himself, as a FRIENDSHIP EXPERT to help reform Sombra. How the heck will he pull this off? Sombra is a stubborn guy, he likes crystals, hates not-being a king. So it's not going to be an easy task to reform him. Well, it's going to go much worse than expected.


Coverart: https://www.deviantart.com/assassin-or-shadow/art/Help-Me-461682268

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My sides

The cover art alone deserves an upvote

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haha, yeah i found that drawing and i HAD to make a short story around it!

That cover art is awesome.

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it is awesome. you should follow the person on DA, i am!

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If you keep this up. I'm going to have to follow you

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aw tysm if you do!! i try to keep a consistent work pace, but i mostly wrote this story for the fun of it, i write most of my stories for the fun of it! but i'll try 100% to keep up good work, it's considered good work. :twilightsheepish:

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Best of luck

Good job! Chuckled at the part where Discord was getting jealous. Oh Discord.:rainbowlaugh:

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tyvm! yes, i love writing about discord being jealous of flutters, i might make this into a full fledged out story one day, and discord over there might be jealous the entire time! we'll see, but ty for your feedback ❣

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That would be neat.

cool!

RuBoo #16 · 1 week ago · · ·

...Discord, you moron! You are not the epitome of kindness! You are the epitome of CHAOS! Chaos and disharmony! You turn good guys bad, not vice-versa!
...I hope Sombra comes crawling back to Fluttershy for a heaping helping of Kindness... I like heel-face turns, one more reason why Fluttershy is best pony.

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yes, discord is delusional, he isn't capable of reforming sombra at all, hopefully sombra DOES go back to flutters. but tyvm for commenting! :twilightsmile:

good story

the picture is hilarious :rainbowlaugh:

The cover art alone is hilarious and I really like how this story ended. Well done

I like the idea, but the grammar flubs are hard to get through, so I ended up just skimming most of the story. Work on that, maybe get a proofreader, and this could turn out to be a very interesting story.

You are genius.

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56 #25 · 1 week ago · · ·

"This is correct."

And " this is incorrect and difficult to read, " because " if there is a space on both sides " it makes it " very difficult to figure out which text is " inside the quote and " which text is outside " because it is symmetrical, " especially if a paragraph has a lot of dialogue. "

Never mind that with dialogue, you really should be starting a new paragraph each time a new person starts speaking. But if you aren't going to do that at least do the quotation marks correctly.

Actually it looks like you may have done the paragraphs correctly, I couldn't tell at first because the extra spaces made the whole thing an unreadable mess.

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i'll work on that, ty for the feedback! i appreciate someone pointing out my mistakes so i can work on it in the next story. :twilightsmile:

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ty very much! it means a lot, ty for your feedback.

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i am getting a proofreader and editor, don't worry. i do apologize if my grammar messes up occasionally, but thank you for bringing this to my attention, and i will get an editor soon! either one on here or my friend.

loved it i think its cute

FLUTTERSHY! Make him stop hissing!

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