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Turns out, Sombra is back, wow. Discord takes it upon himself, as a FRIENDSHIP EXPERT to help reform Sombra. How the heck will he pull this off? Sombra is a stubborn guy, he likes crystals, hates not-being a king. So it's not going to be an easy task to reform him. Well, it's going to go much worse than expected.
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The cover art alone deserves an upvote
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haha, yeah i found that drawing and i HAD to make a short story around it!
That cover art is awesome.
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!!!
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it is awesome. you should follow the person on DA, i am!
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If you keep this up. I'm going to have to follow you
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aw tysm if you do!! i try to keep a consistent work pace, but i mostly wrote this story for the fun of it, i write most of my stories for the fun of it! but i'll try 100% to keep up good work, it's considered good work.
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Best of luck
Good job! Chuckled at the part where Discord was getting jealous. Oh Discord.
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tyvm! yes, i love writing about discord being jealous of flutters, i might make this into a full fledged out story one day, and discord over there might be jealous the entire time! we'll see, but ty for your feedback ❣
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That would be neat.
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perhaps .
cool!
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tyvm!
...Discord, you moron! You are not the epitome of kindness! You are the epitome of CHAOS! Chaos and disharmony! You turn good guys bad, not vice-versa!
...I hope Sombra comes crawling back to Fluttershy for a heaping helping of Kindness... I like heel-face turns, one more reason why Fluttershy is best pony.
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yes, discord is delusional, he isn't capable of reforming sombra at all, hopefully sombra DOES go back to flutters. but tyvm for commenting!
good story
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tyvm!
the picture is hilarious
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it really is!
The cover art alone is hilarious and I really like how this story ended. Well done
I like the idea, but the grammar flubs are hard to get through, so I ended up just skimming most of the story. Work on that, maybe get a proofreader, and this could turn out to be a very interesting story.
"This is correct."
And " this is incorrect and difficult to read, " because " if there is a space on both sides " it makes it " very difficult to figure out which text is " inside the quote and " which text is outside " because it is symmetrical, " especially if a paragraph has a lot of dialogue. "
Never mind that with dialogue, you really should be starting a new paragraph each time a new person starts speaking. But if you aren't going to do that at least do the quotation marks correctly.
Actually it looks like you may have done the paragraphs correctly, I couldn't tell at first because the extra spaces made the whole thing an unreadable mess.
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i'll work on that, ty for the feedback! i appreciate someone pointing out my mistakes so i can work on it in the next story.
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ty very much! it means a lot, ty for your feedback.
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i am getting a proofreader and editor, don't worry. i do apologize if my grammar messes up occasionally, but thank you for bringing this to my attention, and i will get an editor soon! either one on here or my friend.
loved it i think its cute
FLUTTERSHY! Make him stop hissing!
Oh wow that was something so I guess Fluttershy have a little bit of a problem with Sombra ever since he showed up and they had to reform him even though he gave Fluttershy's a hard time and even Discord was getting so tired of him as well so he asked for Fluttershy to help him and so she did and she tried to have a conversation with him which it looks like Sombra was actually starting to open up but unfortunately Discord got a little bit jealous and they decide to find somebody to help him instead well Fluttershy has a certain ability to make anybody even the worst pony or creature to become good I will say this is a very interesting story keep up the good work