A Comforting Picnic

Sugar Belle comes over to Sweet Apple Acres, crying after an incident at Sugarcube Corner. Big Mac gets the idea of having a picnic with her, to cheer her up.

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Krystal Clearskies

Krystal Clearskies #1 · Jul 10th, 2019 · · ·

I think Big Mac attacking the guy was a bit of an over-reaction, and him getting off the hook so easy was a bit unrealistic, but a very cute, very enjoyable read. Thumbs up!

Beau_Dodson

Beau_Dodson #2 · Jul 10th, 2019 · · ·

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TF was that shit? Also:

"Well, me and Applejack's a hard worker.", Big Mac stated. "And as for Apple Bloom, she does less on some days. Plus, she gets to spend time with her friends the most, because she's out of school. Doing stupid stuff and childish things. Applejack and I are happy for her, but sometimes when I see her having fun, I feel envy of her."

Is English even your first language? Try this:

"Well, Applejack' and I are hard workers," Big Mac stated, "and as for Apple Bloom, she does less on some days. Plus, she gets to spend time with her friends the most, because she's out of school. Doing stupid stuff and childish things. Applejack and I are happy for her, but sometimes when I see her having fun, I feel envious of her."

Damaged

Damaged #3 · Jul 11th, 2019 · · ·

Coverart sauce: https://www.deviantart.com/jhayarr23/art/MLP-Vector-Big-Mac-and-Sugar-Belle-745715764 (SFW and cute)

The Lunar Rebel

The Lunar Rebel #4 · Jul 11th, 2019 · · ·

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I think he's just grammatically-challenged. Anyone on here who has a bad looking OC as their profile picture is bound to have many issues. How he even amassed eighty-seven followers so far is anyone's guess.

OmniFox

OmniFox #5 · Jul 11th, 2019 · · ·

If those two get married, Apple Bloom would gain a sister.

Beau_Dodson

Beau_Dodson #6 · Jul 11th, 2019 · 1 · ·

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Hello, 9-1-1? I'd like to report SHOTS FIRED!

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #7 · Nov 16th, 2021 · · ·

Well that was a nice and very unexpected short story it's always sweet to see Big Mac and sugar belle hanging out and dating and I will admit they are cute together and the guy was a little bit rude but I guess that's what happens when you work in a restaurant like that I seen this happen so much but anyway this was a very good one keep up the good work

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