This is a Telltale: Walking Dead + MLP crossover.
Game is owned by Telltale.
MLP is owned by Hasbro.
Earth, the homeworld of the human race is plagued by an unknown virus which causes the dead to reanimate and eat living organisms without any sense of consciousness, emotion or hesitation.
Before the virus, there was a man named Lee Everett who comes from Georgia. His Father, Mother and Brother worked in a pharmacy, which they owned. Lee was a history teacher who worked in the University Of Georgia. He had a wife, who has a job which causes her to travel around a lot. Lee wished to have a family with her but her occupation prevented them from having that.
One day, Lee left work due to feeling sick and found his wife having an intimate moment with a state senator. This sends Lee into a state of blind rage and he kills him in a fight.
Coincidentally, at the start of the outbreak. Lee is being transported by a sheriff to prison. They were on their way out of the city and the sheriff engages in a conversation about a prisoner he dealt with in the past. The sheriff does not pay attention to the road which later proves to be fatal for him. He does not see the person on the road, Lee yells from the back of the car to watch the road but is too late.
They collided with the unknown individual and sends the car out of control. The car busts through the rail of the road. They fall deeper into the forest and Lee is knocked unconscious.
2 months have past since then...
Finally, another walking dead crossover. I like the way how the main six went to the human world and also how Ben Paul, his friend Travis, and their teacher David Parker were doing before David's or Travis's demise.
It's just Pinkie being Pinkie, don't worry about it Dashie
I'm very glad David Parker survives this, oh yeah and also Travis.
I'm not trying to offned or criticize your story but you have to kill off one of them later. In the world of the undead, many characters would either die or went missing. Also how will you get good ideas when you change the plot of another plot you didn't made will make it more difficult for you to continue the story. I already experienced that cause I was also writing a crossover of MLP and TWD: The videogame. You must study the plot of the game and make sure you can overcome the problems along the way.
Anyway, good luck.
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I understand, thank you for the feedback sir!
wow, honestly i'm surprised. i'm really enjoying this. i ran out of things to read, so i just searched a few random things. glad i found this, and i'll definitely be reading every chapter that comes out.
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Thank you, sir!
I am very thrilled to hear that you're enjoying this story!
I'm kinda enjoying the story except for maybe a few grammers I think. Just double check the grammars and see if there are errors.
Mm... I really expect Rarity to faint, but it's fine cause in the walking dead, BEN FAINTED WHEN HE TRIED TO CHOP LEE'S LEFT ARM LATER IN SAVANNAH
Do you played the game?
Lee would probably give the rations to Clementine, Duck, and maybe Ben if this was a movie instead of a videogame.
I couldn't imagine giving the axe to Larry though, but i think it's a good choice since Larry is one of those ‘friend to foe’ characters.
Oh man is it dead already?
Wow, Travis' death reminds me of Mark's scrapped death where he got shot by an arrow and died while David is the amputee of the st.johns. all of the scenes were scrapped due to unknown reasons.
Lesson for everyone: marshmallow mare doesn't trust her magic.
I really liked the new episode.
wow, i actually kinda forgot about this story already. xd
glad i have the story on tracking. :P
good chapter by the way.
Our "kind" hasn't even gotten to the point of teleportation yet, but I don't think we will get there now though
I did briefly wonder why you had the mane six come in at start of episode two, but I quickly realised that it wouldn’t work with them coming in before they got to the motel. I had to pull up the wiki to remind myself of some of the characters as it’s been so long since I’ve played season one, but so far not bad and I’m looking forward to more.
I liked it, especially how Travis’ death affects Rarity and the rest of the group
Was that sarcasm? Or he actually agree? I couldn't identify if it's sarcasm or not.
Is Telltale: Walking Dead in any way related to the comic book series The Walking Dead?
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Only Hershel’s farm and the prisoner (the one with glasses) which the police officer from the episode ‘a new day’ mentioned.
Pst: and also Shawn's death
I remember this part of the game from when I watched a play through of it on YouTube. Can-dees_Murder_Weapon's retelling/re-imagining of the game was made better by adding adorable brightly colored Ponies.
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nice crossover, but Rainbow isn't THAT stupid that she doesn't know what 'Examination" means
Does anyone remember that other mlp and telltale walking dead fanfic?
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You mean this one. Haven’t read it but it looked interesting, though it hasn’t been updated in almost a year.
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Yeah
Instead of moaning for "Braaaaaiinnnnnsss" The trotting dead are moaning for "Frrrrrrriiiiieeeeennnnsshhhhhiiipp".
It IS magic, afterall.
It would be interesting if they save Beatrice. i'm waiting for the bandits though
She's.
We.
A'hm sorry.
Well comparing to the last chapter this one is sliiiiiightly better but you still have a lot of job to do before I could call this story at least enjoyable.
And man what's wrong with you and past tenses? Why do you keep using a present ones?
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Hello!
I appreciate the feedback, it's helpful. I'm actually typing the story out in present tense and at the time, I didn't realize that I was using past tense.
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No problem, sir.
I just found this story and i really enjoyed it!
I cant wait for when the hiathus is over. :)
Well I have to say now it's much better than before, much smoother, easier and comfortable to read, have you rewritten previous chapters? Cause if you didn't you should do this at some point.
Leave making everyone and add "and" before it.
Add "she" after "how".
I'm pretty sure it's through not throat.
Haven't seen rushed moments here, like the story so far even though it follows original tell tales TWD story with a few little changes, seeing mane six adapting to the new world is quite interesting.
And we're slowly getting into the city.
This question is off, either "Do you have no shame Twilight?" or "Don't you have any shame Twilight?"
If he was.
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Ya, i can see where this really has the same feel of the Telltale games here. Well done.
Teleport away
Hang on tighter
yes...yes it is
Well I have nothing to say quite decent short chapter.
A part.
That feels off, simply climbed up the ladder will be better.
Well that's going smoothly and the fact that I pretty much forgot the events of the first TWD just makes this read a tiny bit better.
This much is unnecessary.
That'll be all waiting for the next chapter.
I have a feeling that this should be for.
Fine job as always, keep it up.
I think it should be ached in her wing but I can be wrong.
Honestly I've lost who was talking there for a bit, try to avoid making this much dialogue without indicating who is speaking which line.
This of shouldn't be here.
Get rid of the first but and add comma after hatred, it will sound better.
This ever breaks the sentence, delete it.
I think you've meant very hard to believe.
Move that comma to after know.
I know Kenny is accented dude like AJ but I am sure this should be there are.
Right next to one.
Is the first she'd suppose to be she should or she had? If it's she had that it should be she'd been. And I think you've meant she was going to be out for a while.
He was when entering the city.
Better change it to she'll come down when she is/will be ready.
Remove the first comma and change the second one to a full stop.
More mishaps then usually, hard week or something?
And we slowly nearing the point when everything will go to hell, though it is going here already, don't do alcohol guys.
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Probably more mistakes because I wrote more than usual.
Going to.
If I remember TWD plot correctly, next chapter should bring action.
Oh, the tension.
A couple of mistakes here and there but I'm too drained after today to point them out, maybe tomorrow.
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All good, dude!
Whose been bit?
10583724 Twilight Sparkle.
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You think it'd effects her?
10583949 Yes.
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Oh, no.
10584162 She'll try to hide it & tell everyone she's fine, but eventually she'll be found out. Typical zombie apocalypse senario.