Fly by Night
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Not bad.
I don't know how you got off my watch list
Brilliant
Words! Have all of my complimentary words!
*deep breaths*
I have deemed this to be highly enjoyable. I applaud thee.
Wait...that was all a ROLEPLAY!!!... I approve
Ha! That's was hilarious. I realized what was going pretty early, the whole role playing thing, but that just made it funnier really. The corny lines had me busting out each time. Short and sweet, well done.
cute i like it here have a pony
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wow. well done. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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Doh!
I'm such a muffin head. I didn't mean to publish this story last night! I just meant to check how long the publish queue was, and then got distracted. I'd meant to get the story run by an editor to shore up the grammar and punctuation before tossing it up on the site.
Ah well, too late now, but I apologize nonetheless.
1075001 Thank you
It was short, and intentionally so. I wanted to try the erm ... adult genre with a short entry before attempting anything longer. The idea itself was based on a sight-gag in one of my other stories (All's Mare in Love and War), so it had some history. Tenuous maybe, but it was there 
1075044 I blame Trixie!
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Thank you both for your kind words! I'm truly glad you enjoyed it . To be honest, I was kind of worried it was too soft in nature to appeal to many readers.
1075303 But of course, it was just role-play! Surely no one would think Celestia could be an evil sadistic monster right?
hehehe
1075523 Role-play is always fun! I just wish I could honestly say I'd never lost it and cracked up laughing in the middle of it in real life.
1075765 Huzzah! Ponies! Come to think of it: I hope Celestia's bedroom was soundproof, and Luna's wasn't too close by. That could get a bit awkward if poor Derpy had to do the trot of shame out of the castle.
1075821 Two great tastes that taste great together! (I was going to make a 'everything's all stick joke, but no. I have far too much class for that!)
1076526 Thank you
Enjoyment was what I was aiming for!
1077201 Oh yes. I enjoyed it for a whole ten minutes. A new personal best.
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Not sure what to do right now...
Do I take a cold shower? Or just let it go?
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Cold shower...
It's not often you can find well written story that is equal parts funny and erotic, but sure enough the pacing and sexual build-up of the story was matched only by the utter ridiculousness of Derpy's sexual fantasy (which gave itself away for me around the time that Celestia chides her for calling her an evil Queen). I was really chuckling along the whole time I was reading, big thumbs up from me.
1077475 ... I do know what you mean, and I'm in that odd position of needing an expression that means booth
and 
at the same time! Hehe as long as you enjoyed it (the story or ... you know ... whatever) I'm just as happy either way.
1077839 I imagine all the showers in Celestia's dungeon are quite cold! Mwahahahaha
1078282 Thank you so much for the wonderful compliments It was a bit tricky to find a workable angle on a Derplestia scene that wasn't either silly, or disturbing (I was not going to have Celestia wearing poor Derpy like a horn cozy! Because ... ouch!). I do wish I'd made the story longer though. Ah well, there's always next time!
1078489 yeah, I'm a real slow reader, so it normally takes me a long time to read something.
but, uh, why would my comments make you 
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1080047 Oooh ... Ok that was my bad. I was thinking of 'a 10 minute record' as something else entirely.
I am not proud of that.
I am a muffinhead!
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... what? what r u thinking of- oh... Oh... Oh! 
I talk dirty.
1080158 In my defence, it was the 'If you know what I mean' poster that threw me off.
Because otherwise, I have a completely pure and non-gutter depth mind. I swear.
1080196 I don't know what you mean? what does that mean?
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You win. I couldn't even imagine a reply I could type with a straight face 
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Excellent!
Dawwwww
I knew it tho about half way through i was like "ohh they have to be role playing"
1084096 Hehe yeah, I telegraphed it pretty early on, but that was intentional. I wanted the reader to (hopefully) enjoy the silliness of Celestia and Derpy's roleplay, rather than try to pull a sudden 'what a twist!' ending.
So much d'aaaw!
1085011 It is my sworn hope that someday, Delplestia will be the most popular ship!
How will it achieve this? Through the scientific powers of D'awwwinism!
Hmmmm....... Really well written. I'm not into clopfics or clopping, but my downfall is: I will read most anything. That being said, awesome story. I can honestly say that until now, I was unaware that you could laugh and have a hmhmhm at the same time. Bravo.
1090358 Thanks! It's just the way I feel about it really. Love without laughter is just lust waiting to burn out.
Or something. It's too early in the morning here to be clever!
1090493 Sorry if I woke you up! And it's never too early too be clever. I find that on early mornings, I have perfect logic and ingenuity... Except for the fact that it works backwards, inverted, up-side-down and curled up a bit. See, I'm rambling. Point: Although I'm not a fan of clopfics, I think I'll make an exception for your stories.
1090565 You didn't wake me up, my sleeping schedule is just royally weird. From the sounds of it, you could think your way through a corkscrew without touching the sides!
I don't know that I plan to make a career (well, fic career ... you know what I mean!) out of clopfics. I did want to try to the style though, and see how it went over. Seems to have done pretty well! The trouble is, I have more idea's than I have time to write them. Plus, I'm lazy. That's probably not helping.
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1090650 Well, if you are ever in need of a proofreader/editor/lunatic, I'd be more than happy to help. And I love being unproductive sometimes, too! (I was going to post a picture, but my phone is being uncooperative :P)
1091772 Thanks! I could probably use it. I've got a few half-finished stories I'm poking away at, but I'm pretty sure they're never going to be publish worthy. If I get any of them done, I'll pester you for a beta-read and opinion
Just remember, you asked for it.
1091977 Bring it on.
1091977 sequel
1092720 Eep! I've got a few possible idea's for a followup, I'm just waiting for one of them to gel into something (hopefully) halfway decent. I'm glad you enjoyed the story enough to want another!
So...I skipped over the sexy bits, but I enjoyed the silly dialogue and and the cuteness of their relationship and the roleplay aspect was well played.
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Trot of shame? Damn, if I bedded PRINCESS CELESTIA I'd do the trot of PRIDE!
I will try to make this vv my last huge picture I post on this site. Ever.
How I feel about this fanfic
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this is so great, im so going to fav this
till the point with the "evil waffle princess" i though "oh man, this shit is serious"
then i read that and "wait...what??"
love it
Very good story! Especially for a first time clopfic.
That was f***ing adorable. I think that's the single most adorable sex scene I have ever read in my life.
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This is freaking awesome
That was one of the sweetest, most dawwful endings ever. Thanks!
That was an absolutely wonderful combination of hot, sweet, and funny. Well done!
This is my new favorite phrase.
3921962 totally