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lol, but wait a second, :eeyup: never said the words "I wish"

Ludicrous idea from the CMC that actually works (sort of)? :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

moar? :duck: PLEASE :D

I'm sorry, but this couldn't be a DBZ crossover, would need to be at least 4000 words long and 99% of said words should consist of the word "HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH" to some extent, and the final 1% would be pained grunts. :rainbowwild:

...Good little short story despite that shortcoming though :derpytongue2:

Poor, poor Spike...:fluttercry:

Fluttershy, what does the scanner say about Rainbow Dash's coolness levels?


IT'S OVER 20%!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

Ha, now that was funny. :rainbowlaugh:

I mean I didn't know it would work. Poor Spike. Sometimes being supportive of the CMC and their ways can be dangerous as well.:fluttershysad:

Please do keep up the good work upon such great tales, in case of a future story.

66495 Yeah, but Neither bib Oolong. ....yeah, I researched that excuse.

66554 Well, I guess 4000 words of grunting could be done...but it's be gross.

66596 Yep. Poor, poor Spike - because if he gets any treasure he turns into a monster. Also, this story had unfortunate things happen to him. :moustache:

I've never seen Dragonball Z... and yet I laughed!

Awesome work.

66842:pinkiegasp: YOUVE NEVER WHAT! SOMEPONY GET HER A DVD SET STAT!

66971you are a girl right?

66973 To be fair, I'm a dude and didn't watch it until about two years ago.

66554
4000 words? Don't you mean....

You know what? No. I'm not gonna do it. Let someone else make the obvious joke.

"get the dragon balls already!”

DO I KEEP READING OH MAN OH GOD OH MAN OH GOD OH MAN OH GOD

I'll go eat then I'll decided when I get but my god man if this turns into what part of me thinks it might turn into
OH MAN OH GOD OH MAN OH GOD

67125
Don't worry bro I got this for you.

Don't you mean... Over Took an arrow to the nyan double rainbow

Okie Dokie I just finished reading it and I have to say I laughed quite a bit :D

67340 Uh...your comments are kinda weird today...but glad you liek!

68391

Sorry about the messed up comments :l I had gone 2 days without sleep Haha

Great story just needs more grunting, yelling, sound effects, and explosions.

67125 Yew mean o'er 9000? :rainbowdetermined2: How about Over 20% Cooler!

Oh and, Moar pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese????????????????? *uses adorable eevee eyes* :scootangel:

This story still needs far more views

How did this get accepted? there's not even 1000 words.

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