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Undead Equestrian Writer


Fuck it

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After returning from one of the map's orders to stop evil in a far away town, the Main Six return to Ponyville, ready to relax, but when several students in the school start acting aggressive and feral, it goes from a relaxing week to a fight for survival.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 17 )

9697084
Exclamation, so good.

Could benefit from a thorough proofread. Some odd sentence structure here and there, and a few spots that just have spelling errors. That said, I'm intrigued by the premise. The pacing seemed fine, and it's a good length for a chapter setting up the foundation of the story.

9697114
Well, it could have been "Damn! That shit bad" but aight, I'll take a good "Damn, that shit cool!"

9697185
Yeah, I get it. I can certainly relate to the desire to get a thing out there as soon as possible. But have you heard that old saying, "an ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure." A little bit of extra effort in the present can really go a long way into the future. It's good to develop those habits sooner rather than later. And trust me, just going back over a story thinking "how does this sound in my head" when you're not distracted coming up with the words is a very simple thing that can make a monumental difference.

9697212
I wrote this quickly because I have to get my wisdom teeth removed so I didn't want to forget this

Oh cool. A plague.

9702121
I don't know.
But have a like.

Are they vampires or zombies?

Cliffhanger!!! I need to know what happened with applejack

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