• Published 23rd Jun 2019
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Miss Rarity's Finishing School For Fillies - Togashi



With no other options left, Applejack and Dash turn to Rarity to help teach the girls some manners. Surely Ponyville's most prim and proper mare will be able to help?

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This gives a me a great plot idea.

Pun intended.

So will button mash get revenge on Rarity

I hope we get another more extended and detailed tribadism scene later on. This one is good, but it feels like an appetizer to me. :rainbowwild:

Been really liking this story so far.:heart:

It may be me but I wonder if Blooms and SB keep doing stuff together they may just become lesbians.

Unf. Yet another great chapter

Having all the fillies flustered all day was hot, their interaction with older sisters on point. Tribadism also delivered splendidly.

Rarity's technique are starting to bear fruit, the fillies now going to her willingly and actively proposing new ways to expand on their lesson. What has she done :pinkiecrazy:

“Just like her sister…” said Rarity softly.

:pinkiegasp: that's an innocence I didn't think would have been broken. That opens up many new exciting possibilities, even the giant all sister orgy is now one step closer to reality

I do like the starting part on bridles, further clarifying their purpose and role in Equestria and the way in which other ponies see them. Rarity still managed to sneak clop in even there. Bloom genuinely surprised me, super excited to see where this goes

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even the giant all sister orgy is now one step closer to reality

Yeah, that would be great! :pinkiehappy:

9745203 I hope that involves their butts. :twilightsmile:

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Since bloom is enjoying humiliation, maybe pet play eventually?

“I bet it feels really weird, huh?” Dash asked. “It feels pretty strange the first few times, but you get used to it. I have one for fancy events at home; I barely notice it when I wear it anymore.”
The orange filly stayed silent. She had no way of knowing Dash was merely talking about her dress bridle, specifically designed to not even be felt when worn.

I wonder how Dash would react if she knew about the actual nature of Scoots bridle?
This parts gives me hope she won't react well...
(Same with AJ later.)

“No winking girls. Or off it goes.”

I would have expected Rarity would even encourage winking.

“Remember though, we are all proper fillies and mares here. If I hear about you clopping outside our classroom, you will be punished…”

I've got a feeling she would require lots of punishment herself if that would be the case.

Nice chapter, good work.

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Nah, I am hoping that she gets away with it scot-free at this point.

I know that the CMC and Diamond Tiara & Silver Spoon are now friends but how will they respond to this.

9748044 Chances are that they won't be involved.

I've been kind of debating whether or not to actually add this to my read later list, mostly because of one question:
How much will Scootaloo and Apple Bloom end up changed by the end of the fic?

Like, will they still be themselves, just more willing to listen to what Dash and AJ say?
Will they end up not quite brainwashed?
Or will it be somewhere in the middle?

I realize that answering that question might end up spoiling things later, but that's just the kind of person I am sometimes.

One thing that'd definitely increase the chances of me reading this is if something like the following happens: Dash and AJ, while satisfied with Rarity's results, find out about what she did to get said results, and end up giving her a fitting punishment of their own

So, I went ahead and read it.

So far, while I don't love it, it didn't make me as uncomfortable I was expecting, which is a good thing.

I still hope Rarity ends up getting a bit of karma from Dash and AJ for her methods, though.

Though it is still weird to read Dash talking about "being a proper mare".

If the cmc can't use their mouths, did they just go all evening and night without eating and drinking?

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You can still eat and drink around the bit of a bridle, it is possible

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A normal bit, for sure, but not a ballgag that the girls are wearing.

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Not yet. This fic will be the next update I post. Still working on it.

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Actually that's a good point.
I figured they could drink with them on, but eating would be nigh impossible. I missed a prime chance to have them pig out at Rarity's and do some foodplay...

I hope to see this finished, really enjoying it so far. I would love to see more clop between Rarity and Sweetie though.

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I missed a prime chance to have them pig out at Rarity's and do some foodplay...

Yeah, I would love to see them making pigs of themselves and getting really fat in the process. :pinkiehappy:

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I would love to see more clop between Rarity and Sweetie though.

Yeah, same here.

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