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Kurt Mio, first human diplomat in Equestria, finds himself trapped among inhabitants quite unlike him. In a land where no creature holds his own motivations, and with the entirety of his country fighting to tell him what to say, how will he cope?
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It's a curious thing you have going here, but I feel like we've jumped into the middle of the story, without setting up the pieces that are currently in play. What's here is good, but I feel like we need to know how we got here first.
9693268 You're absolute right. On it.
I initially tried to do one of the "throw the user in the middle of the story" strategies, but it feels like it's fallen flat.
For all the knowledge of magic, I’m kinda glad humans are better than ponies because of this amazing thing called common sense.
9698679 It's probably for the best. If there's anything that scares me most, it's common sense mixed with magic.
9699738 Common sense and magic together would be pretty scary. While Twilight and Starlight eclipse Sunset in terms of raw magical power and potential, they’re not exactly sane. Granted that Sunset’s not as good with magic any more thanks to lack of practice and living as a human, she still remembers some of the spells that she’s done under Celestia. As a human, she is no longer limited to the bounds of cutie mark magic to a degree and has learned to be more creative.
If Twilight’s cutie mark represents magic itself, what does Starlight’s cutie mark represent?
9699793 Magic, but with toothpaste...
9701628 Does toothpaste even do anything? I mean, the only other pony I know who has this is Colgate... I think.
9701707 I fear what horrors Starlight and Colgate might awaken. There is no power greater than that of the toothpaste. Brushing teeth OP. I think a toothbrush is one of the few things I couldn't live without. These ponies thrive on the happiness generated by happy chompers. And there are a lot of happy ponies. Let that sink in. All of the ponies in the world lending them their power like it's Goku charging up his Spirit bomb
9710306 Oh, god.
Enjoy reading this so far. Then again always find vomit funny.
Use baking soda to brush my teeth.
9738814 You are the chosen one, defeat them