On Equis, in the land of Equestria, Twilight Sparkle makes a discovery that could change her world's history, for better or worse.
On Earth, in New York City, a young musician and metalhead, named Kenneth Marshall, makes a pact with a strange man after a complicate night.
This transports him to a mysterious forest full of magical creatures. But he soon discovers that he can sing and play all the music he wants, like songs from his favorite artists.
As an ancient force awakes, two worlds are about to collide. Trouble will ensue, but also some laughs, tears and a lot of music. And, from all of this, a truth lost in the abyss of time may be revealed. A truth that some wants to keep hidden.
Chapters (13)
nice bra keep it up look forward to more
Good story. Eager for the next chapter
Cool this is back
Damn this is getting good! I will definitely put this in my library to hold
I need moar!
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Thank you very much
Moar is coming!
Intriguing
Golem?
One thing that never cease to amuse me is that the first greeting from the land of harmony was not a handshake but often a spearhead.
A really nice Story, I hope next thing Kenneth plays is something like Beast and the harlot or Something from Rise Against
Moar pls?
Hmmm, the scenario is a bit strange. Our human did not seem to posses any abilities to aid the mysterious entity. What was the point of bringing something that apparently cannot be used in the first place?
Mark my words, Spike is going to go through a punk-rock phase at some point in this story and Rarity and Twilight are going to HATE it.
Hmmm pretty good so far I do hope to see more.
Sorry I didn't catch this while proofreading, but Luna should be capitalized.
I think that "american" should be capitalized.
Also, the nickname "nerdy" for Twi is a proper noun, as I said the same for "Miss Classy" and "Manga Girl", so it should be capitalized as well.
Sorry if I'm being too objective here. It's techically my fault since I didn't catch these during proofreading. I just want to do this stuff before other people point it out and be overly objective about it.
But nevertheless, this was a wonderful chapter.
This was a really well done chapter! So Kenneth respects Luna. Nice.
Please update more often!!!
Other then that I will read this book now.
Don’t let me down! :D
HA, I love it!
Keep it up!
What kind of logic that produced this conclusion?
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True but I like this story!
Keep it up author!
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I am still trying to catch the flow and direction of this story. Nonetheless, Pinkie's outburst in this chapter is one of the best reasoning I have ever read for quite a while.
I like this character, he's very interesting. I've seen alot of characters that were obviously good guys, gary stus and even jerks with a kind heart, this is the first character that's pulled off the later well, I honestly see his point of view. Unlike most jerks in stories iv read he actually is likable and he's not just an asshole, he's a character you can understand and enjoy, you feel his stress but also his enjoyments. Please keep the story up
And just like that, a new ship was born.
So, we have Fluttershy, Pinkie, and Rarity being called by their names now.
Progress!!!
I have a feeling Spike is going to be next, when he grows a backbone, and I really love how this chapter shines a light on Kenneth’s more honorable traits. It shows that Kenneth and learn a lot from the Mane Six and Spike, but the Mane Six can learn from Kenneth too.
Honestly I kinda forgot about this story but glad to see it in my tracking with a new chapter again! Also it’s alway great when pinkie the one ya lest expect makes the most sense and I love it when the mane six get a smack in the face of how they actually been to the MC it’s always so amazing to see people who see the mane six as people who fuck up just as much as others and pay for it some way or another in this one it was their happy go lucky friend basically saying “Your funny, you judge him for how he acts yet you do no better yourself. In some cases your worse.”
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Heavy Metal? In My Little Pony?
Sign me up!
Show them the glories of Iron Maiden, In Flames, Judas Priest, Black Sabbath, and Bolt Thrower.
Thank you for writing an interesting story with the power of metal.
This was a very well written chapter, great job
Cool chapter!
So, I guess Kenneth respects Dash now... I think? I can see why an insult match like that would appeal to him.
Any chance Kenneth would know Green Day?
In any case, Twi’s evolving relationship with Kenneth continues!
Cenotaph, by Bolt Thrower?
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Thank you for that tasteful death metal.
I think that Symphonic/Opera Metal would shake up the boring Gala. Hellfire, Blind Guardian or Luca Turilli, or even Ayreon would make things interesting.
Or well, finding a pony equivalent of Floor Jansen to Floorgasm them.
Thank you for updating this fic.
Glad to see another chapter for this story hope to see more soon and quicker then it took for this one :P
I understand writing takes a bit depending on the person and what they are writing so don’t feel rushed on my part just stating what I hope to see. Keep up the awesome work!
Fantastic chapter, as always. Keep it up!
I look forward to more.
I think this is the most badass thing I have ever real, haha. Metal as shit man.
You know what, I'm actually sad to see that this is the last chapter since I started reading this. This story was so good and now I'm sad that there isnt more of it, but that just means I have more to look forward to. Good job my friend!
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If this story is complete, then shouldn't it be labeled as such?
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It is far from complete ;-)
If you ever need me to do small revisions like last time, then I'll see when I have time to do it :)
Most likely Tuesday I will have time, since I'm taking a break from work on Tuesday.
If that's a bit late you could send me the doc and I'll see what I can do today.
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Send a PM for this kind of message ;-)
Ugh, give it a rest Luna, that human is not so scary. Those ponies thought Zecora was a witch.
What's manicured hair?
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Thank you :-)
I corrected that
Get this guy a little more edge and he might be able to cut the Bullshit
Neat story so far but this guy wishes for the death of his species because he's had a few bad experiences? Someone pissed in this guy's cornflakes one to many times it seems.
That was too far, even for Blueblood.
Interesting to see Kenneth’s powers beginning to come through though.
Oh no.
Keep the chapters up!
ITS ALIVE!!!
YAYYY
Damn, that was an emotional chapter
Blueblood is a fucking idiot
Looks promising so far 😎
Faust would be proud!
(not Lauren, you know which one I'm talking about)
Plz update!!! This is a very good story :)